Reviews for What They Did
Jazznique chapter 1 . 4/29
I can clearly see that no one not even yourself has proof read this. It seems like it would be a good story but it's extremely hard to read with the spelling and repeated words. I am going to read the other chapters but it's irritating that you would write something and then post it without reading it through yourself. I even re-read this review before I posted it to make sure the spelling and grammar is correct so you will understand what I'm saying. Great imagination, bad spelling and grammar. Does your computer not have spell check?
kspauldinghyatt chapter 4 . 6/17/2015
come on please update I reallllllllllllllyyyyyyyyy want to know what happens
Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
What is chapter 5
Jasmine chapter 4 . 8/10/2014
What will happen to the cullens
Guest chapter 4 . 4/22/2014
a bientot
gleefan2009 chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
love it please write more i can't wait to read more
Braxton1995 chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
awesome story, can you please update soon
AnitaM17 chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
Update
Guest chapter 4 . 5/26/2013
You need to update
Chloe Souza chapter 4 . 5/18/2013
Update please
reobessed chapter 4 . 4/28/2013
oh hopefully u update dis cuz its getting intersting
reobessed chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
just pointing this out, its not 3rd pov. It loks lik its B's POv. Otherwise i liked it
reobessed chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
i luv it n lov how B is these different parts. Awesome start
meghanstar66 chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE NOW PLZ!
Twilight2014 chapter 3 . 2/21/2013
please update soon
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