|Reviews for On the Line|
| Stardiouses chapter 1 . 1/26
Omg, this was awesoooooome. I loved every part of it. The progression and the different situations themselves were amazing.
| ellce chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Omg I love the progression, from the first call to the parkinglot make out session I was captivated. It followed character pretty well and it was just really good.
| xXxConimaxXx chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Nice and very sweet. Got to say though, I think if you write a lemon scene it would be well written.
| SophieNewman chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
First Royai fanfic I've read, and probably the best. Great job. :)
| glowbox chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
omg i could totally picture the scene with the pay phone in my head. awesome i could actually see roy and riza's relationship play out like that.
| DeadFlash27 chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Such a good fic
| bluepianos chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
THANK YOU, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I love the gradual development of their relationship throughout the five times he calls her drunk. I seriously enjoyed the call that Havoc interrupted. I'm SO glad you put Hughes in the story and enunciated that he (and the rest of the guys) just KNEW what was going on between Roy and Riza. UGH I haven't read a decent Royai fic recently and this was beyond satisfactory. WELL DONE.
| CJbean chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Wow. That was seriously good. I'm always so impressed when a writer can pull off a sexy Royai fic while still writing them in character. And you did just that. I'm getting shivers up my spine just thinking about that last scene...this is definitely something I will read again.
| Woodrokiro chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Oh god this will forever be one of my absolute favorite Royai pieces ever done. Wonderful work!
| w1nchester chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
This is absolutely perfect, ok.
| renzie17 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I CRI. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. AHHHHH
I LOVE THIS. EVERYTHING ABOUT IT.
THERE ARE NO WORDS TO EXPRESS HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS ONESHOT. I LOVE IT DOES NOT SUFFICE.
... Maybe this will:
so much love from renzie17
| Carolnuts chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
I love you and everything you touch
| Treacherous Desire chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Fantastic! I loved it.
| claraowl chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Wow. That was exceptional. Brava! XD
| kawoosh chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This was amazing!