|Reviews for On the Line|
| jealous21 chapter 1 . 7/18
the fifth time gave me chills,it was so awesome:)
| caspasta chapter 1 . 5/22
I love this. :)
| dapangtaoz chapter 1 . 4/28
OMG this piece is just so adorable! My heartbeat actually sped up when some sentences hit me...
May I translate it into Chinese (with link and reference of course)? It would be lovely to let more ppl enjoy the story~
| karithelight chapter 1 . 4/23
very well written
| fangirlsweg chapter 1 . 4/10
i absolutely love this. they were very in character, not that i usually mind ooc, but the actual characterization of them is too precious and lovable. the thing is though, i cant imagine them being sappy n shit going by cannon. so yes ALCOHOL IS LIKE THE BEST PROP FOR THIS SHIP, according me me ofc. great job on this fic!
| threegee chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
how about they wonder how many ways they can continue doing what they just did in the morning and live happily ever after together?
two thumbs up! liked it!
| Amelia Loves Anime chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
I really like this story! X)
| Pandora Imperatrix chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Oh gosh that was... intense. Wonderfuly well written too
thank you so much for sharing
| Angelazzy chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
That was so amazing... I thoroughly enjoyed every second XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
| Stardiouses chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Omg, this was awesoooooome. I loved every part of it. The progression and the different situations themselves were amazing.
| ellce chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Omg I love the progression, from the first call to the parkinglot make out session I was captivated. It followed character pretty well and it was just really good.
| cutieconcon chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Nice and very sweet. Got to say though, I think if you write a lemon scene it would be well written.
| SophieNewman chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
First Royai fanfic I've read, and probably the best. Great job. :)
| glowbox chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
omg i could totally picture the scene with the pay phone in my head. awesome i could actually see roy and riza's relationship play out like that.