Reviews for Mysterious Disappearance of Ash Ketchum
Nigel Yearning chapter 1 . 3/29
Well that escalated quickly.
Rodri chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
He burnt Rodriguez!
Atizfan4 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Is that it
DP chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
hay mate i think you should contion with this like brock misty and the other go on thir jornry to do thir dreams come on contion
nightelf37 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
…I don't know what to say about this. I just feel so…dissatisfied.
SkyGem chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
omg, i want to know what happens next! update soon!
AdventureWriter28 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Y-ko chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
...The end?

That's a really awkward place to end it. I don't mean that in some kind of "ooh, a cliffhanger!" way, I mean it's like you had a thought, half-wrote it out, then thought "eh, whatever" and posted it before you finished. Very clever of you, to make the rest of the story so bad that the reader won't care when you cut it off without making a point.
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Darkrai is so mean