Reviews for Dance in the Dark
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
This wwas DISGUSTING HOW DO U SLEEP AT IS ONLY LIKE 10
F chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Have the mom come into play.
guy chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
allright
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
This is disgusting..
ethan chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Not very good
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
just gross!
Nnenna chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
This is negative and rude
gfhds chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
ghdjs
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
could have more detail
m1tt chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Boring
The Writing Crow chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
That was a really emotional and interesting story. I liked it better than your other one slightly. Teddy seemed to have more of a mature and likable personality where Gabe seems to act a lot like I would which drew in more of my interest. Keep it up, I hope you make more work of those two.
jon wuva chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
omg hawt so good
AlexisonfireCP chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Normally I don't like incest but this story is amazing. :) definitely being added as a favorite of mine.
woopwoop10 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Definatly needs another chapter! awesome!
hipsterr.primadonna chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
i refuse to read this, but i just wanted to say, NEVER use a gaga song when writing something this effed up. incest is wrong and disgusting & no one should ever read this.

plus, isn't gabe like 11? that's gross.
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