Amazing story, thank u for writing it

Okay, what Bella has done in this chapter is cruel. Down right wrong on more levels than the highest tower in the world.

Yes, Edward might not know what he wants but to tell him this lie… SMH and lowing my mind.

I can’t see how they can come back from this, if I was Edward, man when I find out she has not lost the baby, I would have her ass in front of a court so fast her head would be spinning! There would be no coming back from this, no forgiveness at all.

I have not had a problem with these two up until the start of this chapter and I should probably wait until I finish reading it but…

They both need to pull their heads out. You in or your out. This wishy washy attitude of them both is killing me!

Her skin was TAUT, not TAUGHT.

The past tense of "lead" (pronounced "leed") is "led," which is pronounced the same as the metal "lead."

What is a "show-box container"?

Wow! Your writing is amazing! At times I think a scene is predictable you twist things around and awaken more possibilities. I loved the idea of this story and hope you continue to write more! Thank you for sharing!

I just read this all in one go and absolutely loved it!

:) great

With my only baby, my daughter, I went into labor on Pitocin at 6:30am on July 3rd, 1992. She was a little more than three weeks premature, but my blood pressure spiked dangerously, so she had to come out. Eleven hours later at 5:32 p.m. she was born at 7lbs 10oz and 19.5 inches long. I can't imagine what another near month would have yielded in her size. I wasn't able to have an epidural due to back problems, and the narcs they gave me wore off two hours before I delivered, so it was all natural. Funny thing, with the final push, the doctor was busy with trying to manage the cord, so she popped out past him. I had instinctually lowered my hand down beside my leg, which enabled me to catch her head in my hands before she shot off the table and hit the floor head first. His response? "Good catch." I think I had nightmares for a month afterward at the possibilities had I not caught her.

Omg, I read this story yearrrsss ago and am rereading it. And I forgot how frigging awesome you are at writing angst. The last two chapters have had my heart in knots and tears in my eyes! Oh man... I'm feeling... verclemt! *in Mike Meyers' Saturday Night Live character voice*

Really Jasper you asshole she was pushed by Rosalie fans . Rosalie she pat herself on the back for getting Bella hurt. Rosalie and Jasper are horrible. Bella needs new friends. Yes I blame Rosalie her and her big mouth.

I wonder if Edward’s gets mixed up with Jasper’s and they use it on the wrong women if that makes sense… just judging from the summary!

Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing.