Reviews for Part One: Menace Reborn
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Great plot and chapter
JediGaladriel chapter 13 . 2/25/2015
Oh please please don't abandon this! Please continue with it! I'd hate to see another fantastic story go unfinished! Please don't give up on this! I hope you'll reconsider your decision or at the very least see if someone wants to continue writing it (though I'd prefer you writing it). Again, please don't give up on this!
Master Yaddle chapter 13 . 5/20/2014
God, this premise is so original. Obi-Wan as a youngling? I never would have guessed. I'm sad to see that it's been abandoned. I'm dying to know what happens next.
klester1987c chapter 13 . 7/2/2013
PLEASE continue!
GinHanelle chapter 13 . 2/14/2013
OH darn and I so want to know what happens next. Gah! I suppose I am willing to wait ages and ages for you to become interested in this story again. On the bright side, this story is completely awesome :D so thank you for sharing. I had fun reading it.

Patiently waiting.
sylviajohns chapter 13 . 12/26/2012
Finally, Obi-wan! :D This is all very interesting, although I would expect Anakin to be more... dark sided :P I hope you'll update soon :)
Ginebra chapter 13 . 9/8/2012
waaa nice please update soon
AnyGils chapter 13 . 8/2/2012
This fic is really interesting, and I'm so glad I found it. The time-travel is believably weird, and Anakin's character is believable too. The change with Obi-Wan is really intriguing. I'm looking forward to continuing to read this fic, and hope your move is going OK!
Galaxiacana chapter 13 . 7/14/2012
AMAZING STORY. Love the plot line. I am immensely looking forward to an update!
Guest chapter 13 . 6/29/2012
So good! More Please!
Athalanta chapter 2 . 5/18/2012
Can't not feel sorry for Qui-Gon in this one - just when everything was going to be perfect, he gets Darth Vader as his padawan. That is NOT what he so fervently bargained for!

*evil laugh* Serves him right for not training Obi-Wan, karma is a *****.
Andromakhe chapter 13 . 5/14/2012
Hmmm. Evil cliffhanger. I hope Obi-Wan isn't going dark. It's hard to believe coming from the Obi-Wan we knew, though anything can happen with him vulnerable now. The ending of this chapter is pretty ominous. Qui-Gon will not be pleased if Anakin disobeys. This is still a captivating read. Definitely will keep an eye on updates.
Andromakhe chapter 5 . 5/14/2012
This just gets more interesting. My favorite part was the irony in the conversation about having an apprentice before Anakin and the pointlessness of dwelling on could-haves. I am really loving the focus here on how Obi-Wan's absence has changed Qui-Gon. Also getting satisfaction from Anakin thinking that maybe having Qui-Gon as a Master was foolish idealism.
Andromakhe chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Okay. I'm really liking this AU. I like that Qui-Gon is a little colder, a bit more distant, the way he had been with Obi-Wan initially. I like how Qui-Gon is plagued by the loss of an apprentice as Obi-Wan was plagued by Qui-Gon's loss. I am also liking how the lack of an apprentice has changed circumstances and made Qui-Gon subtly different. Too many AUs seem to paint Obi-Wan as a bad Master or that Qui-Gon is a perfect one, and I don't think the reality would be so simple. Good start. And if Anakin is true to form, I think he would not take so kindly to any of Qui-Gon's mistakes as Obi-Wan had. Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan worked largely because they both knew how to apologize and do so whenever necessary. I saw nothing of the sort from Anakin.
YouFoundMeAgainXx chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is amAzing xxxx
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