|Reviews for When Hope Deserts Us|
| Azaisya chapter 1 . 2/23
Too lazy to log in. Anyways. The idea in this oneshot is very good, but there are lots of minor mistakes, like punctuation, that takes away from the overall idea. Try to add more emotion into it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
WHAT?! THE END?!/!
| Obsessivebookworm14 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I liked it. I was just wondering, where were Daja, Sandry and Briar when Tris called for help? Where they in Emelan?