Reviews for Make our Future
Guest chapter 10 . 10/13/2012
Dear Jashin, please don't let the weeaboos rape the Japanese language with those OH SO CREATIVE baby names...
Hinata28h chapter 20 . 12/22/2010
Okay, love the story so far, but 2 questions.

1) Who's For?

2) Did Sasori become pedephile?(A bigger one, because in the series he's 35 while Deidara is19.)

Have you noticed the HUGE age gap between Hidan and Kakuzu in the series, Kakuzu is like 98 years old and Hidan is 23.
Iwa-chan chapter 18 . 10/5/2010
Ahah! Sasori will see them! What did Sasori and Jamal do? Please update soon!

Iwa-chan _
Iwa-chan chapter 17 . 9/30/2010
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while- I've been a little busy. I can't wait for the next chapter, will Sasori or Itachi or maybe someone else see them? Or is it Tobi? Please update soon!

Iwa-chan _
Iwa-chan chapter 14 . 9/10/2010
Good chappie! Did Dei and Saso break up? ANd good idea with the 3 notes at the end and stuff, it will help out a bit, i think!

Update soon!

Iwa-chan _
Iwa-chan chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
Aww, that's so sad!

They do get back together, right?

Right?

Oh PLEASE tell me they get back together!

I'm starting to believe I hate Jamal...

He tore Sasori and Dei-chan apart! *sobs hysterically*

Iwa-chan _
ArcaneHiddenMagic chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
this is good. update soon
yuki-neechan chapter 11 . 9/5/2010
oh wow...I am now wondering if Dei is going to kill the kid and ya it is a little hard to call Dei a he if he looks so much like a girl
Blood Drenched Scorpion chapter 11 . 9/5/2010
*chuckles* Maybe it's because deidara is acting like a wife and womanly around Sasori? XD
yuki-neechan chapter 10 . 9/1/2010
lol this is going to be funny I can tell it update soon please!

yuki-neechan
yuki-neechan chapter 8 . 8/25/2010
ok I wonder what they are going to name her and I slightly loled at the sakura part
yuki-neechan chapter 6 . 8/24/2010
ok I want to see that picture!
yuki-neechan chapter 7 . 8/24/2010
awe why did you make him hate his daddy? Lol I still like this even though its a little short its still good:D
Blood Drenched Scorpion chapter 6 . 8/23/2010
*grins* deidei-chan in a dress really make me go..., never mind...

Hahaha, from those days eh? Sasori~ I always knew you were such a kinky seme...

Eheh, sorry for the poll by the way. Must've slip my mind.
Tweaked-uniquness chapter 6 . 8/23/2010
Aaaahh! Oh god, poor Dei!

haha his childeren have turned against him already! lol
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