Reviews for Fate
Guest chapter 12 . 10/19/2014
I think this story you wrote was just fine. P.S your summary is pretty good
Jeanne chapter 12 . 8/18/2014
Great story! .
krazy chapter 11 . 2/24/2014
Please continue
Hello Panda chapter 11 . 2/18/2014
Great Story. Love the plot
Fluttershy 2059110 chapter 12 . 10/13/2013
That's fine. Great job writing this story though! Thanks.
XxGottaLuvMahHaterzxX chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
In hindsight your chapters are not that short. If they were i would be finished with this story by now 'cause im a fast reader. This story is also coming along greatly!
with lots of Hugs,
XxGLMHxX
Sarah j chapter 12 . 1/11/2013
It's okay
lola1919100 chapter 11 . 6/14/2012
I'd really like it if u make an epilogue but if u don't want to it's okay I love this ending but it just needs an epilogue :)
mooimcute chapter 3 . 1/27/2012
Erm, in case you didn't notice, you said "Twelve years later" and then began the story on her seventh birthday. I think you might want to change that ASAP because it's confusing and everyone reads the story like she's a child when you apparently intend her to be older.
Amara-nii chan chapter 12 . 12/30/2011
i love this the chapters were short but still asowme the stories are great you don't need to redo them
sasusakubelong4ever02 chapter 12 . 11/10/2011
I LOVE IT!
Kendimo chapter 12 . 11/6/2011
awww i love stories like this i hope that you can make a squequl pleaz

this story was adorable i love the part when they were named prince and princess and sauske kisssed sakura and some went aww or cheer

this can be a good princess story

they should make a movie

UPDATE SOON

PLEAZ MAKE A SQUEQUL!
Hotaru Himura chapter 12 . 10/16/2011
i really like this story! the beginning is amazing! ;D

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FAN chapter 11 . 9/9/2011
I really love it
Fr3aky Lik3 M3 chapter 11 . 8/11/2011
happy ending... will you continue or end it? anyway i love it
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