|Reviews for Monochrome|
| lauren0712 chapter 1 . 4/18
What a great little story concept to add depth to Arthur's character. Really enjoyed this orginal idea!
| silberfuchsII chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Wow that was great -even though i figured Athurs colorblindness out as soon as he asked for the apples- and it is well written and nice and somewhat deep, but on top of all that my favorite beer is Killian's Irish Red as well - and I'm german so that has to mean somethig. And I totally love the last sentence. Thanks for sharing.
| Book girl fan chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
That is pretty interesting, and would be an excellent as well as fascinating way to tell dreams from reality.
| shieldmaiden19 chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Aw how sweet! Lovely bit of writing here. Thanks for sharing!
| outwriter18 chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
This had my attention from the very beginning and kept it until the end, and I find you making Arthur colorblind to be absolutely genius. From the start I was excited to figure out how he knew the real from the dream, but I didn't even guess what it was up until you revealed it. Definitely fits in with the very nature of Inception, and I especially like how Cobb and Arthur are perfectly in character to the T. Extremely well done and thank you for the amazing read!
| stupidvariousreasons chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
"My college professors all thought so. But my kindergarten teacher thought I was an idiot."
Ohmygod YES IM DYING!
:D sooo good
| PippaFrost chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
OH MY HOLY FREAKING GOD YOU'RE A BLOODY FREAKING GENIUS! HOLY FREAKING SHIT ! JUST... MIND BLOWING! LIKE, SERIOUSLY! MY BRAIN? ALL OVER THE PLACE! HOLY SHIT!
| So1Thought chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
This is darn cool. Reaaaaally neat. As long no one knows about hiscolourblindness... XD
| Miss Ashlynn chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Pretty neat, although technically you aren't supposed to let anyone else touch your totem, so that was the only thing I didn't like - when Arthur lets Cobb touch the dice. Nevertheless, I still thought this was a cute short story.
| Bookdancer chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This was fantastic! A brilliant idea, and it was written really well. Excellent job, and keep on writing!
| marinawings chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
This is a fascinating story! I found it on a favorites list and had to check it out. I love the way you write the characters and the friendship between them. And wow, what a surprise with Arthur's monochromacy! And he dreams in color! When you revealed that, I got chills. :)
| girlwiththeblackinkpen chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Great job. It was really good.
| Ash Cassidy's Maker chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Wow. That was amazing! Thank you!
| WholesomeToast chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
I LOVED THIS! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED THIS! so good so perfect so right so simple so beautiful so INCEPTION!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Fascinating idea! I figured it out pretty early on but i could only think wow, so creative. Kudos!