Reviews for Inside The Cloak
Wildwolf13 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
It was nice. But Wills mum didnt die of childbirth. Have you read lost stories yet? Wills mum was murdered. And you were a little off with Daniel killing the warguls. But pretty good
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Not really canonical, Halt meeting Daniel. But otherwise, I loved your portrayal of Halt and his immense care for Will.

Great job.

Ani
Aylen Timber chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
This was heart-warming to read. :) Everything Halt wouldn't say out loud...
claudia chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
I thought it was awesome! I love the relationship between Will and Halt and think that they should be much closer in the books. It has also ocurred to me that after 5 years together, they should know each other better. In my mind( even though I know that it's not realistic) Will and Halt know each other better than the back of their hands. I think that you should write a story about Halt comforting Will about Skandia or Will comforting Halt about Ferris.I mean all too often people ignore the fact that Halt can feel emotional pain too. He's not infallible! His twin brother tried to kill him! I also think that Slagor and his crew should have raped Will. It sounds mean, I know, but I can't help it. Again, I loved the story!
gman chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
that was great
sicily chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
THIS IS SO STUNNING!

IT IS BEAUTIFUL!
runningcrazy4EVER chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
I thought it was a cute and sweet little drabble! Drabbles are just as much fun as big long stories! Feel free to drabble more! :)
Lady Bec of Imagineland chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I really liked this story. I love Halt I mean if he was like 30 years younger and not married I would marry him. This story was awesome!
Miss Enthusiasimal chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I think it's pretty good as any story would be trying to get into Halt's head. Really like the ending that's awesome.
RoMythe chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Too cute! Halt's feelings. Everyone agrees he'd never show Will anything of them. I haven't read Halt's peril yet, but I really want to!
Azlarok Tolkien chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I thought the drabble was cute, but... You need to update WHII Book 2!
Rowana1 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
! I love it! Hehehe, I wanna see donkey Arthut lol ; (I can't get the video) Which...eh...half go turned into a donkey? *Blushes and dies* XP

THIS WAS AWESOME! ? I love Halt *Huggles him and dodges arrows* ?