Reviews for Amarain
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Beautiful, just, beautiful. I loved the story and all the details. It made some interesting pictures as I was reading it.
Nevermore Marni chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
This story is fantastic and I love you.
That is all.
LGrimm chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I've read this about 5 times now. I like your stories. Not a fan of genderbend, my brain doesn't compute. This one's a favorite.
Royalte chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Freaking amazing! Now THIS is what I like, even if that makes me a cruel person. I really love all that bondage, bdsm, etc (though I wish there was more bondage)
But yeah it was great! Beautiful, really.
I loved how Malik was "it", just an object, ohmygosh I just loved it so much!
nihao.muse chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Okay, why does this have so few reviews, that upsets me. I should have reviewed sooner, myself. This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time, bronzeshipping at its finest. The little details you put in really made it stand out. Making Malik call his yami by his own name and the image of Malik praying were my favorite parts. It's all so well-written, though. I really like the idea of Mariku never meaning his threats, that Malik's pleading just adds to his pleasure. Please continue writing!
Rubellite Game chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
So awsome.
letterbee96 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
First and foremost, this needs a sequel.

Secondly, that was freaking awesome in the best way you can take it for this kind of story! That was so cool... Honestly, no one pulled this pairing off as good as you did! Thanks for writing this and keep it up!




sessiles chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
The Mariku-in-Malik's-mind has been done before, but I've never seen it so completely pulled off as in this piece. Excellent work.
Hovinarri chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
...I think that any praise I might want to give this may and will make me seem weird, but whatever.

That was great! You write possessive Yami Marik so nicely, and in character too!

/that did freak me out a little, but...

Thanks for the read!
Neko Kirikiri chapter 1 . 8/18/2011

I love this story, now is with my favorite fics for can read it more times.

I will check your profile, and I hope found more things like this fic, you have talent n_n
Bwilla chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Wow his was very good for your first bdsm fic, acctually it would be considered good even if it wasn't your first.
CATKITTYLOVER chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
That was really good. I like stories with lots of substance and this one had it. I almost want a sequel. LOL
Phoenix0192 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011

FUCKING BRILLIANT, excellent job, beautiful writing, sensual images...blimey I actually can't think of ONE point to say "if only..." Characters were wonderful, the thought processes were brilliant and the most fantastic part about it was that you didn't neglect a plot or a reasoning behind what went on. That was there and this is FANTASTIC

Keep up the GREAT work

- Phoenix
looptheloopy chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Wow... That was just... I was reading this when we had people over! D: and my auntie was like "What are you doing? You haven't blinked for ages."

I just went red and said some lame lie about facebook...

Seriously though, this is hot! I have no words in my vocabulary to explain how amazing this is... Bravo! I never thought I'd like BDSM but it fitted this
Natsu.Arisu chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Funny that you post this now, because I was in the mood for some BDSM. Haha.

Anyway, I liked the perspective you wrote this in - referring to Malik as an "it" and everything until the last couple of sentences. I also liked the bit with Mariku telling Malik to call him by the name of Malik, and not the "shitty fake one" he gave him. It was pretty canon at that part for me since, if I recall correctly, Mariku said that maybe he's the real identity of Malik Ishtar (or something like that, I don't know how to word it XP).

Also like the love and hate concept - how they're two sides of the same coin. I've heard if before and all, but it applied to this greatly.

Oh, and I agree with the part about someone swearing at you making you uncomfortable. It worked here and it wasn't overused or anything.

The part with Malik praying got me. The fact that it showed Mariku that Malik still had hope was just...I don't even know how to say it. XD But that part was...I don't know, intriguing? XD Interesting? For lack of another word...My vocabulary is quite limited right now, it seems...

You never cease to amaze me, CR:)
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