|Reviews for Monochrome|
| Serenity Lhane chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
GREAT STORY! There isn't many lymlexfaize stories out there, less than 30 I think. I think u did a great job, when people do OOC with the characters, they usually screw it up, but u did an awesome job, and to be honest, it was probably close to how lymle would have acted after the 2 years. Since she matured and all.
Anyway bottom line, you did an excellent job on the story and I hope u are able to write more!
| thedragonguru chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Eek! It's so sweet! I love you!
But just so you know... Once instead of saying Lymle "shut" her eyes you said Lymle "shit" her eyes. LOL, just a heads up.
Aw, this story made me happy!
| Sawahii chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I loved the way you the Calnus members came to visit her sometimes - Bacchus offering to live with her? Endearing! I always thought that he was almost like a father figure to her!
Very fluffy! Heehee, they kissed in the end! *fangirl squeal*
Btw, you've got a couple of minor typoes here and there, e.g.
"she didn't clench her eyes shit" - I'm pretty sure you didn't mean to swear...
But otherwise *thumbs up!* I'll be looking forward to it if you decide to make it multi-chappie!