|Reviews for The X Games|
| PrincessLilith57 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Awwwwwww! Whats with All the sad one shots all of a sudden. Like damn! Poor Jazz I can't believe what Edward did, I thought something was up when he mentioned Riley and Edward got that look but I just thought that maybe Riley was a dick to him when he got his autograph or something but DAMN! I am hurting right now, that betrayal hurt *me!*
I also REALLY wanna reAd Edwards pov of things hopefully he had a good reason. I know he felt the love in what him and Jasper did I KNOW I wasn't just Jasper!
I love you and your stories I can't want to read another!
| Firefly1989 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
God, I loved it! Wow... I need a moment there :) That was amazing. Poor Jasper, such a betrayal...
Please tell me you will continue this... It was so powerful, I need to see the next competition. I need to see them again.
Good luck! :)
| izziey chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
well twisted, you sure lived up to your name, didn't you?
please, please, please, continue this story. i need edward's pov!
| Peaches 26 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Love, love,love, love, love this. I don't think that I am the only one who is hoping that this continues on for another chapter or too. I kinda hope that we get to hear Edwards side. He seemed genuinely remorseful about what he did to Jaspee. I am really really angry at Edward for being so mean spirited and conniving.
| Ealasaid77 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Well that was... depressing. Riley is an ass.
| Darloudasha chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
ooo I do hope once the contest is over you will continue this... it's excellent.
| Kerrfrano chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Fucking loved this story... I refuse to call it a one shot because there is some much more in this than the amazing words I just read.
Please please please please please please continue this story... I want to know what the fuck is going on... did Riley use Edward? Why did Edward agree to do it, if that was the case? If it was only a game why was Edward so affected?
These and more need to be answered ... plus a happy ever after.
| Julestwentysix chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I can't believe Edward would treat Jasper like that did Riley coerce him into doing it as payment for all he'd done for him. Fantastic story. Jx
| Heidi34 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
That was awesome. I wish you luck in the contest and hope you continue it after. I need to know what happens next for jasper. does he get revenge on Riley? Will he forgive Edward? Oh, and a lemon between peter and Jasper would be
| IndecisiveMe chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I'm not a huge slash fan, but the summary of this one and the fact that is has Jasper in it made me give it a go. I loved it. I love your writing. My heart literally ached for Jazz after he found out about Edward's betrayal. I'm hoping we'll hear more about these two. They have such great chemistry.
| isacz chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
wow! I LOVE this!
| butterflybabe23 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
PLEASE tell me this is not a one-shot. PLEASE tell me there is more. PLEASE tell me things work out for them. GGARGH! I'm freakin out here freakin out! This was absolutely amazing! but I need more! lol PLEASE continue if you can! This is great and has amazing potential!
| msashlyjudd8 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Wow, that was messed up. Great One shot.
| leckadams chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Once again brilliant writing. Definitely not what I was expecting to happen but loved it none the less.
| thesepianohands chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I love this story because I feel like you wrote from your heart in it. If you hadn't written it so magnificently I might be a little irritated you didn't continue it, but I can't be. So, thanks for posting it!