Reviews for Fresh Beat Band: How it all Began
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Then they found a boy name larrion he ask kiki marina twist and shout what was their name. Larrion had three brothers name devonte mikquel and Rodney they had a mother name lateshia
Lizabeth Carmen Mendoza chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Hey dude great job with the story but , to make it even better I suggest to pair up Shout and Marina , and Twist and Kiki together to make it more interesting it would be like the most cutest couple ever but , still it was fabulous or it is!(: Well good luck please update soon chao!
Frenchie chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Can you please pair up Kiki and Twist please! There is a lot of marinaxTwist stories but no Kiki x Twist stories so please pair them up and UPDATE! Thank you
Daphine chapter 2 . 11/7/2011
Please make Twist and Kiki to fall in love please i beg you!
JadrienFilian chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
You really need to learn the mechanics of writing. "find out how these quadruple came up with their band!" This makes no sense. Use the word "quartet" instead of "quadruple" and write this: "find out how this quartet came together." Something like that. Too many problems to mention.
WerepireGurl chapter 2 . 9/10/2010
cool story continue I think u shuld pair up Shout and Marina
snixor chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
Cool story. (: I think it'd be cool if you pair Kiki and Twist.