|Reviews for Danger in the Sun Village|
| BlueCrystalmoonlight chapter 8 . 12/23/2010
Yay you updated :)
| BlueCrystalmoonlight chapter 7 . 12/12/2010
| Frosty10001 chapter 5 . 9/9/2010
*facepalm* I feel soo stupid for not reviewing when I alerted. Oops.
This story is exceptionally great, you describe the characters and their personalities well! And the characteristics of the existing characters are matched perfectly as I can practically picture their voices in my head, now that's a good thing.
The idea of this story is so far well executed and it's awesome for you to be continuing what one has left off, I wonder what else Ayako knows of the light style.
As for grammar and spelling, so far I didn't find any grammar mistakes but I didn't proofread it thoroughly. I did one spelling mistake...
-"I will personally take down this evin doer myself."- Chapter 3.(I think that's supposed to be evildoer, not sure what evin is.)
Anyway I'd hate to see another good story crumble down as it's very great, I'd read it anytime! (I should know, my 20-something chapter story has no reviews...)
Good luck with it, and keep the good work up! (Stupid school getting in our way...)