|Reviews for Quitters Always Win|
| Sakural7865 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This is one of the best lemons I've read in a while! And you think this is bad? Whoever says it is will meet my yami/Chain! And she isn't a pleasant person to meet at times
Keep up the good work, TotalAlias! You rock!
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
You said you thought this sucked. It didn't. Not one bit. It was an amazing lemon, especially for someone who hasn't written lemons before. The one note I'd give you about it (and this includes grammar/usage and spelling notes that I might have given) is that having people type in the moans as dialogue generally brings me out of the lemon a little. I prefer (although I'm not sure how many people agree with me) imagining the moans and screams when they're described, as opposed to typing in dialogue such as "A-ah!" I just think it leaves more room open...and that's also just my opinion - Gokuro-sama to ganbatte - (good job and work hard/good luck)
| NonActive2012 chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Ok, so I've already read this fic and I've got to say it is beautifully written. I love it! -Luna
| no more writing for now chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
oh my. Now this was very hot. Much, much, much enjoyed
| Hesunohana chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
well, that's a way like an other one, isn't it ?
great work !
| JojoLightningfingers chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I love your little comments at the bottom. XD Highly amusing.
And YUM. I need to read more OzGil. x3
| SilverRedox chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
lol yaoi XDDDDD
| twistedimension chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
oh boy, oh boy, that was definitely nose-bleed-worthy! how i love all your smutty ozbert stories xD
| RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
this was awesome
| Neryma chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
what the fuuk? this was ur first lemon? :O
i'm impressed *claps* u did very good job!
like u have been writing them for a long time :DDD
| Green Sprout chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I love this pairing but fuuuuuu not much on it besides fics! I am going to write this stuff!
buuuuuuut besides that this was a good effort even for a first timer! X) I really like the humor also thrown in along with the hotness?
Hints? I dunno make it detailed, make sure to use lube always because dry hurts like a bitch, teasing, gil? *shrugs*
x.x; still GOOD FIC
| watch-me-write chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Wow, I loved this! :D It was really sweet, especially when you went into the part about the seal. That was really cute and sad at the same time...
And the rest of it was really hot! :D It was great and lovely and fluffy all over~! Thank you! :3
| AuditoreAbyss chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Tehe I have no words XD Ah poor Gil, the seal is at 9 o'clock already he must be terrified :(
It really doesn't seem like its the first time you've wrote a lemon! You wrote it so well!
I've needed this fic ever since Omake 6:
"It's chocolate cigarettes,
I thought that would be better than not having anything to keep your mouth occupied." Really? Mwahaha!
So thankyou hehe!