Reviews for The Breakdown of Yuki Nagato
vodkaCanidae chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
That was a really excellent portrayal of how a breakdown of Yuki Nagato would be like. You did a fantastic job conveying Nagato's experience. Thank you so much for writing this! Loved it!
Punitor567 chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
...Damn. Is all the good stuff hidden way back in the past?
This was serious good. You lost me at parts, but that's what I liked about it the most. As for Nagato cracking, I think this right here fully explored the possibilities of the few-thousand-odd time loops.
Seriously good job.
Mader Levap chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Now that is well done Sanity Slippage.
Ergoemos chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
This was really smart. I am a sucker for Endless Eight stories, and this one was really good at telling Nagato's mounting frustration. The flashbacks getting worse and worse were very intense, and the almost muddled ending was well done. I like it when people notice that Kyon's concern for Nagato's well-being is consistent throughout time.

Good story, Thanks!
CurrentlyOccupied chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
I loved this! It was so damn beautiful (sorry for the language). I love your writing style, and the way you manage to keep so in character. I like the way you use repetition in this story, while each time something is repeated, it is slightly different. I've been wanting to read a fanfiction on The Endless Eight, and I'm glad I found one that exceeded my expectations by far.
Fallen Dragonfly chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
This is fantastic. I love the way you've written it, and kept everything all in character too. Best Yuki I've seen yet.
Devil Reader chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Nice, really nice.
flairina chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
That was...


God DAMN...

I just...

RealRemainder chapter 1 . 5/29/2012

I would go there too. Poor nagato... Reliving the same thing 15 thousend times, with a mind closer to human. Good job writing this.

On a con note, it is a bit confusing. Can't really tell whats happening now and whats from a previous loop... Holy shit did you write like that on purpuse? Lolz
DivineProjectZero chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
This is definitely one of my favorite Suzumiya Haruhi fics of all time. The alternations between previous loops and the present, Yuki's eventual erosion of sanity, and Kyon's utter oblivion to what is happening...It's rather heartbreaking. I enjoyed reading this story; I intend to come back and reread it quite often.
Laniessa chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
The title is a bit tacky but the contents are absolutely beautiful. Yuki and Kyon were both in character, and the way the loops meshed together showed us was Yuki was going through, and her slowly breaking down into something miserable was done brilliantly. That sliver of resent for Haruhi was hidden well, and I loved it.
The Reality DumPer chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I was confused, but I got what you meant.
cybersteel5780 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
If I was Nagato, I would have gone crazy too. I liked this.
fanficavidreader chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
i've been a fan of fanfiction for almost 5 years straight...been reading a wide variety of stories..on different animes with different genres...this by the best i've read ( my best was the kaliedo star fic named phoenix reborn ) ...dang nice..and the way you made your story, made me watch the endless eight episodes..twice..complicated very deep...simply perfect. (and to think nagato is a cgaracter very hard to portray.)

Please..keep up the good.. i mean best work! I would really like to be reading more of your stories (anime tho so i could relate p)

thanks a lot!
A Random Reader chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This is the first time I have come across a reason why one of the Loops did not have a Bon festival.
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