Reviews for Affannato
Harmonian Zutarian chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
So, you've had three reviws before me, and this is now review number four! Congrats, you!
WeirdShortPerson chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
madnezz iz amazing

there"z no room for zanity

and reality fliez out the window

...what an adrenaline ruzh ;D

kidding, tho-

cool ztory
RunningoffXanaxYank chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
lol wow! I never knew you could write so well. Thats a com;lament not an insult! lol!
Kiseki Lin chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
As I haven't seen it and only wiki'd, I found it was an interesting piece.

I can definitely feel the sadness from Giselle. It seems a bit wordy - as in purple prose, but that is easily overlooked in trying to get into the mood. Though it doesn't seem to capture madness all that much. It's, as you've said, a more romanticized piece. It seems more of her lamenting along with feeling the love flowing through her for her beloved.

I liked the fact that even if it's in first person and a bit short, there's enough detail in there to give an inkling in what's going on without being confused.

Though not quite mad, I do believe that you've captured first person in the romantic sense in here very well. Might've not been what you were getting for, but still an excellent job well done. :)