|Reviews for Healing Touch|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5
This is really great. My OTP is defiantly Amy/River after reading this even if they are mother and daughter.
| rob chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Beautifully done. Lovely prolonged tension as River and Amy move slowly, oh so deliciously slowly, to where they long to be. The conclusion is truly wonderful. So much so I want to see it again.
"You're so sexy," River whispers breathlessly against her lips, sliding her hands down Amy's chest to cup her breasts. She moans, stifling it a little by pressing her lips to her cheek before she pinches the Scot's nipples. "I wish I could touch you more."
"You'll have all the time in the world when you're better," Amy promises before kissing her again, suppressing moans from both of them as Amy picks up the pace both inside of River and against her own clit.
River's eyes are closed, her face etched in ecstasy as she draws closer to the edge, one hand squeezing Amy's ribs as she tries not to be too loud so the Doctor won't hear them. "Fuck," she breathes, and Amy can feel River's walls start to tighten around her fingers as she buries her face in her neck, her knuckles turning white by how tight of a grip she has on the other woman. "Fuck," River repeats, her voice getting a little higher, a little more desperate, "Oh fuck!"
Amy whimpers, shutting her eyes tight as she too starts to get impossibly close. "River," she breathes into her neck. "Oh God." It doesn't matter that River isn't the one touching her; it's still her, them, together like this. River holding onto her and gasping into her ear, all but begging to be thrown over the edge and into oblivion… it was the sexiest thing Amy has ever been a part of.
River's trying like hell to keep herself relatively in one position, though it's starting to get difficult. Her gasps are now both in pain and pleasure, but she wouldn't stop it for the world. "Don't stop," she begs, feeling her orgasm start to come and worried Amy will know she's in pain and will stop out of misguided concern for her. "Fuck, Amy, don't you dare stop!" she pleads desperately, her nails scratching at Amy's back before she screams, her walls pulsating rapidly inside of her as she comes.
"Oh God, River!" Amy yells, half muffled by being in River's neck just as she too falls over the edge almost directly after. They both grasp for some skin, some contact, panting and blind, feeling nothing else besides each other. "Jesus," Amy breathes, feeling like her head is swimming as she wraps her arms around her and kisses River's neck.
River doesn't say anything for a moment, but she wraps her arms around Amy; holding her close to her. She turns and kisses her forehead, trying to ignore the pain in her back. She wouldn't ruin this moment for anything, anyway
| ToastedBaby chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
this is disgusting you do realize that amy is river's mother
| DigitalBro chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Amy had sex with her mother, River 0_0. Then again, this is before River revealed that she was Amy's daughter.
| Inferno-Neko-Youkai chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
This story is absolutely beyond amazing. The descriptive wording, the mannerisms, and the characters all of them were stunningly real. It's like you took an un-aired episode straight from the series. Wonderful job, I love your writing and how it was sexy yet funny and still had enough tension to almost drive one insane. Keep writing! 3
| iLuvJohnny chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
That was, no doubt, one of the best Doctor Who fics I've ever read. Very hot, very FUNNY! You captured their characters perfectly, and I loved every minute of this story. Very well done.
| Goose197 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Very hot. Wonderful
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
delicious yet realistic
| ChiliChocolate chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I've loved this story for quite a while now, it's brilliant! But I feel so guilty after the last episode! xD
| NymphadoraxLestrange chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Holy... sweet... hell. That was the hottest thing I have ever read in my life. I think I just died. I can't believe that was your first Doctor Who fic! You're a fantastic writer. I'd love to see a sequel where River and Amy do it again when River is all healed. :3
Keep up the great work! xx
| Piazzolla Pie chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Oh, how you write.
I've read this story a couple of times more than I probably should have, but it's yet to get old. I'm going to sail right past the "oh, Jesus, that was so hot it makes me want to..." part because anyone who's read it knows it doesn't even need to be said.
I congratulate you for your terrific take on what's really a rather simple plot, but the real talent shows in the way you've written everyone just perfectly. The dialogue, their mannerisms; you get them. I really think you actually *get* them.
There are one or two little things I'd like to amend, but that's just me, and there is no way I'm going to let that ruin what is honestly what I'd consider one of the best short stories I've read.
| UmbraBlaze821 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I will admit this isn't a pairing I'd usually think of but this story works really well. You've kept them always in character and it's both sexy and quite funny.
Really good work. Favourited :)
| Serinity46 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Omg, I love this so much 3 Very hot and sexy :)
| Emziiee-xxx chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
wow. All there is to say there.
That last line made me laugh.
And I love how you managed to keep the humour up despite keeping it really sexy. I think i need a cold shower now.
| Sevi Snape chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Thank you! Its like you wrote down my thoughts the first time I saw River Song. Grrrrr that woman is sex personified!