|Reviews for The One True Queen|
| SilverNightmares chapter 42 . 3/11
Oh my goodness, there is probably one chapter left and you haven't updated in 2 years. Oh this is going to kill me.
| Guest chapter 40 . 11/26/2016
Ehh, some talent but god what a nauseating More-Wonderful-Than-Anyone-Ever SuperMarySue... Even at his most prattish, Arthur would have had better taste that to fall for this sickly pattern of pseudo perfection. You need to learn what the word 'characterisation' actually means, and then you'll be a pretty good writer.
| The anomalous chapter 42 . 5/15/2016
This story is absolutely incredible - I have been binge reading it for the last 3 days! I'm always a bit dubious of stories that try to get a different Queen to Guinevere as I like her and Arthur together so much, but you have made Gwynn so lovable and perfect for him that I'm a total convert! The story line is really well thought through: complex, exciting, believable and addicting!
I especially like how you have highlighted Arthur's skills and abilities in this story. Many writers depict Merlin as the sole reason for Arthur being such a good king (I think the show writers are guilty of this too) - sometimes going as far as having Merlin make all Arthur's decisions or making Arthur incapable of making political decisions, battle strategies or even tracking (all of which he's been trained to do 'since birth' and any king worth following should be able to do!). My viewpoint is that, if he is the Once and Future King, then he must possess many leadership and knightly qualities in his own right, for that is why Merlin follows and protects him. As such, when they work together, they are truly unstoppable. And you have seamlessly slotted Gwynn into this legend as well.
So once again, thank you for a fantastic story and I look forward to reading whatever chapters are to come!
| belladu57 chapter 42 . 1/19/2016
| Guest chapter 42 . 5/19/2015
I can't believe the day is finally here! I gave up checking for updates a long time ago, but seing this... Aaaah, it makes me so happy! I seriously thought something awful had happened to you and that you couldn't write anymore. So glad to see that's not the case.
The way you have captured the Merlin/Arthur banter we all love is astonishing. I wish this post-magic outing was something we could have seen in the real series as well. It's so strange yet beautiful to see Arthur accepting Merlin for what he is.
I also can't wait to hear more about Helene/Lescaut. That is one messed up relationship. But come on, they must be able to get over their differences to the whole ''what should have really been done'' question.
Also, I can't wait for Gwynn and Arthur to have their happy ending. They deserve it. Seriously though, you're not going to kill him off in the last chapter right? Cause that would be mean. Last comment: I swear those two must be so sexually frustrated right now. I hope they finally get to be together, and that they aren't interrupted by a certain someone - again.
Okay, I'll stop now before I write a novella. Can't wait to hear more from you, VeryShy! You are pretty awesome.
| prydain chapter 42 . 3/12/2015
This chapter was definitely worth the wait. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
| Nesota chapter 42 . 3/8/2015
Dear VS - I'm elated that you are back writing and going to finish the story! Unbelievably I've been thinking about you the past couple weeks before you posted and was thinking it would be fun to re-read your story! Thanks for the jump start. While I now want to re-read if from the beginning I plunged in anyway and read your latest chapter which reminded me why I liked your writing so much to begin with! I love your take on the story, your humor, your style, and that you are wrapping up loose ends. Bravo! Keep up the great work and keep posting!
Fondly from a huge fan,
| islanzadi1995 chapter 42 . 3/7/2015
what a pleasant surprise to see an update of this week! Made my morning! :D
I am running late to my ortho posting and the attending is super mean but the update should keep me happy through his sarcasm and hate of teaching lowly medical students !
| Patlamouche chapter 42 . 8/6/2013
Well... That was perfect. I hope to see the last one soon!
| Nayla X.X chapter 42 . 3/5/2013
| Mt chapter 42 . 12/18/2012
Yay, she lives! So happy that you will finish the story, even though it must be pretty hard to say goodbye to the charcters. But who knows, they might turn up again in oneshots if you want that :) good luck with everything, and cant wait for another update. So great to know you have not given up!
| CrystalBud chapter 11 . 12/16/2012
This story is VERY interesting, I love the idea of it.
| TwinPhoenixOfDark chapter 42 . 12/12/2012
:O You're alive! Ngl, I'll be kinda sad to see this story end but I look forward to reading the ending once you've finished it. Anyhow. Hope you're doing well and all. (:
| Malin chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
Look, I know it's been months since this story was updated, and that it probably will stay this way for a while. But, please, please, please finish this story! Something so beautiful really deserves an ending :)
| xxz0eyxx chapter 41 . 10/1/2012
I'm so sorry it's taken me soo long to read this chapter!
It was amazing, and that scene between Arthur and Gwynn in the tent :O naughty! Oh Merlin xD
I know this is such a short review, but hey, it's a review, right? ;D
Anyways, I can't wait for the next installment! xoxoxoxo