Reviews for Falling Apart
Tuppence chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
BRILLIANT use of all of the words! Not a single one jumped out at me - they all blended in so effortlessly into the drabble.

And brilliant drabble... I love me some hurt!Dean and adding some angst!Dean to it? Even better. Loved the drabble, Keep doing the whole pre-series stuff. You're not the only one who's got a thing for it. ;-)

~ Trina ~
nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Aw... This fic makes me want to go into that bathroom, take Dean by the hand, and just take him back to bed where the boy should be. Then peel off his shirt and clean out those wounds, slapping on gauze as a temporary fix, and just take care of that fever and stay with him until the poison runs its course.

It kills me to see him all alone and hurting like that... Maybe because I've been alone more times than I want to count and this... is just a sucker punch. Dean alone, sick, miserable, feverish, puking (or about to or just did), and bleeding out.

Dean's the one who fought the hardest for their little family to stay together and the one who sacrificed the most for them and THIS is where that left him. Although, depending where he is, I'm sure if he speed-dialed Bobby, Bobby'd go to the motel room to take care of him, or even bring him back home with him. If he's too far for Bobby, then Bobby would so stay on the phone with him to make Dean feel less alone...

*hugs him gently*
Katydid43 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Poor Dean... poor poor Dean... we do abuse him so. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing :-)
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
"Just keep going" - sniff! Wonderful drabble, and so sad. Thank God he doesn't know how many shades of loneliness are to come...

xxx Kate
Colby's girl chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Welcome back! Great job on the double drabble as well as the other drabble. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Poor kiddo, makes me just wanna go and hug him till he feels better.

Bev x
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Ah God, Dean hurt and all alone, my heart bleeds. Another one you could happily expand on...
DeanCasLover22 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Aw, so sad! Dean I'm here! lol ;)
OcherMe chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Loved it! Hurt and angsty Dean all in one! My favorite flavor :) Wonderfully written
rog457 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
wow that said so much in so few words. It perfectly sums up Dean.

really wonderful
DearHeart chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Hey I'm LOVING ur short stories.. but friggin 'A' I wish they were longer!U seriously need to screw the drabble challenge rules and write multiple chapters. XP Blame it on a fan if u get in Thanx!