Reviews for When You Die Inside
calin na gaeilge chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
awww thats soo cute i really like it !
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
A great poem fic. Very well written.
KelleMac chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
My favorite lines had to be the last three, about Katniss being dead when she is saved. Very sad. Melancholy, actually. This is definitely a heart-toucher, in my opinion. I'm glad you wrote this. It's very simple, but that seems to be what strikes emotion the most. You really have that down. Again, this is really wonderful, and I can think of no criticism.
KeepMovingForward chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
So amazing and hearfelt! Your a beyond amazing poet!
MountainAir chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Wow, that was great. Even better than the other poem of yours I just read :)
deletedaccount8 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Wow O_O that was really deep.

"No matter what she did I still tried,

to save the girl

that really died."

This part of the poem, really hit hard -here. *points to heart* I really wish that you can get get alot more reviews because you truly deserve it, especially because they are so deep and make you think (made me cry). This poem is amazing, and I think that GalexKatniss is amazing too! So yea. Thank you so much for writing this. I'll try and review every story u got :D (At least the one's I know)

I LOVE UR PROFILE PIC! Such a sad sad quote :'( ". . . Would they have been happy, this boy and this girl?"
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I really love this poem it is really amazing I love the rhythming sequence
LoveTheBoyWithTheBread chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
My favorite lines were the last few.

"I tried

to save the girl

that really died".

They were...real.

I liked them :).

Good work!

-Mel
katnisseverdeen4ever chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
that was really good!
SongoftheWolf chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Woah, that was really good! You really have to feel sorry for Gale. He never knows what's going on! Awesome poetry though.
RadiantFlame chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
THAT WAS AMAZING!

i'm not writing anything longer,

because that's all there is to say ;)
CrazyNerdyFangirl chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
That was good. :)