|Reviews for Rotting World|
| VzVegeta chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
That's it? *wants to read more*
| leavingyouforme chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Melancholic. Quiet. Somehow lonely. But with a tinge of hope. I think you've captured quite well the mood of the game with the narrator's P.O.V. who seems to be quiet, reflective and wanting the loneliness, as well as being not so 'generous'. Of course I can't say much about a character with only one chapter but I like Dynra and how he differs from Nier.
Vert on the other hand is too much like Weiss. The ego, the worry and heart hidden under abrasiveness, the temperament - you need to work on him or he'll seem like a clone.