Reviews for Finding Earth
EffervescentNova chapter 13 . 10/11/2013
Considering the limites resources of the Tau'ri and Tok'ra it seems very peculiar that they would spend their resources on a minor allie. An allie which could not possibly sustain the technology without continuous support and who could not even maintain their position, as they are all female. No males, means no civilization or industry, just not sustainable.

I always thought the Hak'tyl were too much a right-on plot point anyway. As if a System Lord would order the extinction of his own fighting force by destroying their mates. Doubly strange as we're expected to believe that Jaffa males would destroy their own families. The whole point of the Jaffa and of their whole society was to sustain the Goauld's rule.

Just weak writing by the showrunners.
EffervescentNova chapter 12 . 10/10/2013
This chapter was just weird. The Tau'ri were boastful and vindictive, completely out of character.

The statement that Earth's population was only slightly larger than most human inhabited worlds was plainly wrong. Since most worlds were under the control of the Goauld and were thus kept both primitive and at low population levels to prevent uprisings. Though obviously low tech civilizations have much smaller populations even without Goaul influence.

The idea that the Lucian Alliance could be a long term credible threat is bizarre, they don't have the infrastrucure to maintain their vessels, not to mention continuous infighting. The Lucian Alliance is an criminal syndicate made up mostly of drug barons and pirates. They wouldnt nearlt have the resources needed to sustain serious R&D projects. Also, you can't just pop to Walmart and pick up million dollar missiles, nor realistically pick up Earth scientists with knowledge of alien tech without somebody cathing on to what you're doing. There could not be that many scientists involved and most would be working for the SGC or related organisations.

What happened to the trip to Bifrost?
Morgomir chapter 13 . 10/9/2013
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
EffervescentNova chapter 9 . 10/9/2013
If the Tau'ri have the ability to negate the inertia of an object then their pilots and ships should be able to withstand a much greater acceleration. So Baltar's description of the 302's having lower acceleration than the Colonials rings hollow. Other than that, this fic is great.
kaleb-yamato chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
Very good so far. More Please.
Rydan fall chapter 13 . 10/2/2013
CARTER!
"Yes Sir!"
Not you
"But...?"
Your dad.
Sir?
Did he have to build a Star Destroyer?
john777 chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
keep writing
Cyrannus chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Ok, on one hand, adding a possible star wars element could muddle things up. On the other hand I've always wanted see the Galactica (with an even level of tech) battle a Star Destroyer.
So the only way we can find out is if we get... ...another chapter!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
seem to be all over the place jump to one location then the next oh well . so who are the new players going to be .
thunder18 chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Great chapter Update soon
Naginator chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Nice look forward to more
EvilTheLast chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Good update.
FranticHamster chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Star destroyer well that's kind of cool flying pizzas of doom and all that.
thedarkpokemaster chapter 13 . 9/30/2013
oh boy this was a very good chapter and it's good to see this again.
Malix2 chapter 13 . 9/30/2013
Great new chapter, keep up the good work. I think it's been a while. :)
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