I like this story. Never read a sg1/ battlestar galactica story that starts on season 4 of nbsg.

hi, I think you have a good tale. I rate the stories I read on whether or not I liked the story telling first. Then I worry about grammar, detailing, etc. I have given up trying to please those that send me reviews about how bad to them I write or whatever, but don't tell me if the story informed and entertained. I write to do both. I liked yours, because it entertained and informed. You have to inform the reader of the world you are exposing them to as well as entertain them. Sometimes you have to get very detailed, sometimes not. If find that varying the pace of the story too helps to give readers breaks from the action parts of the stories, but again some reviewers think that a stroy should have the same pace all the way through.

That is not totally true.

Well you write and tell a good tale and I enjoy your work so far.

Cool chapter.

Interesting story. I hope to see another update and see where this story will lead to.

Wow, that was awesome. Why is this rated M? Its such a shame because this is a great story and that will limit who sees it because a lot of people forget to change to all ratings. Also, i don't think the Cylons' missiles should have been able to take the Hammond's shields down 32%. Asgard shields are way better than that. Those were the only notes i had on this. Its a really cool story and i'm looking forward to more

Interesting story idea, looking forward to reading more!

good start

Interesting start.

Look forward to where this is going.

Should be interesting to see how the SGc takes this and also how the Rebel Cylons react.

Cavil is going to have a rage induced stroke when he finds out how many humans are in the galaxy.

More soon please.

Civil war among the cyclons, can't wait for more.

has a very interesting promise. indeed if this is before the rebel cylons ally with the Colonials it will get very interesting once they are encountered. As I said, quite a bit of promise. Keep it up.

Earth's reaction to the rebels should be interesting. They are somewhere between the human form replicators and the Asgard. I imagine that if the rebels remain non hostile that the SGC wouldn't have much problem with them. Though, that could lead to an interesting situation if they come across the Galactica.

interesting start.. can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story, update soon.

Definitely an interesting tale...

Very interesting start, I've read a couple of fics where Icarus is attacked by the Cylons as the nBSG introduction in the stargate universe. But this is a first where an introduction happens by an intervention of earth to stop a Cylon civil war battle. Can't wait for chapter 2.