Reviews for Defining Masks
kenziecaffrey chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I REALLY loved this.
Wondo chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Awesome writing. How much does Neal reveal about himself to Peter?
ghostdolly chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
this was a very sweet, nice read. Thanks for sharing your story with the rabid fans!
Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Wow, you totally nailed Neal. Excellent job; I can't wait to see more from you!
Gloworm41 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Very nice job on this story - I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
Dew on the Sunflower chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I loved this. Period. End of story.

Luv ya

MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
*cheers* I absolutely loved this! We are very rarely privy to angsty!Neal on the show, so it's always a pleasure to read a work of angst as well-written as yours is. My favorite line - "He had learned long ago, long ago, that while society might have certain stereotypes for how people these ages should behave, truth rarely matched the concept, yet the stereotypes persisted and of necessity, so did the charismatic fa├žade" - I can't even put into words how much that idea has resonated with me. I think you've nailed a possible shade to Neal's being so perfectly. Great, great work and please write more!
DjDangerLove chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
That was extraordinary! You should definitely write more stories!You are a wonderful writer! :)