|Reviews for My Little Princess|
| BearerOfTheLight chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
The story is pretty good!, i have only played PM1, but the story is funny. I liked it a lot
| Amerath's Destiny chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
Y U NO UPDATE? DDDDDDDDD
I've never played PM4, since I can't read Japanese or Chinese, but I've always wanted to. The animation and characters look amazing. D I guess I'll have to continue with PM2...
Daddy's being a bad daddy. If he doesn't watch out, Isabella's going to end up a prostitute. Or worse. D
By the way, does Daddy have a name? I volunteer Farre! Isabella Farre...
Ahem. And now comes the part that some author's don't like. Me critiquing the writing. P I'm not trying to insult you, just trying to make your writing better. Sorry if I offend you!
It'd be nice to see some more description with things, but the style you're writing it in makes it a little difficult to do that. Might I recommend switching to a third-person point of view, and maybe one that follows Isabella around a bit more? I'd like to see more of what she does during the day. This doesn't mean that you have to omit the character's thoughts and funny moments, though.
I'm pretty impressed, though. I haven't caught any blatant spelling or grammar problems yet. (Though, I've only read it once through, so I might have just missed them. P)
I can't wait until she meets up with friends/rivals/future marriageable people.
She does meet up with friends in this game, right?
I SAW THEM IN THE TRAILERS. I KNOW THEY EXIST.
| Weisser Ritter chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
Man, Princess Maker is such a great game...
Too bad I can only play the 2nd, since I don't understand neither Japanese nor Chinese. ;-;
Anyway, thanks for writing this! _ Because of you writing this, I may finally be able to get an idea of what PM4 is about XD.
THIS WILL BECOME ALERT'D
Also, Author fave'd for liking awesome games.