Reviews for Heartache and Love
Keiri DeLaCruz chapter 7 . 5/12/2014
Yuuichi is the oldest brother and Akito is the middle brother
Guest chapter 13 . 5/13/2013
Why does it say that this is chapter three?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
'which was a black jump suit, with red belt, and matching red belt' red belt with matching red belt? 'It was the most simplest outfit' should be just simplest. So far a little OOC but otherwise good.
pretend it was just a dream chapter 11 . 3/12/2013
Now they are both parentless. You were right, this chapter is sad, but it was still good
pretend it was just a dream chapter 10 . 3/12/2013
Oh they ae going to have a little baby girl! I feel bad for Kyoya for having to deal with a pregnant Haruhi.
pretend it was just a dream chapter 9 . 3/12/2013
Oooh, Mr. Ootori just got told! Haha. Great job so far. Going to read the next chapter right now
pretend it was just a dream chapter 8 . 3/12/2013
What did you do?! You can't hurt Haruhi! Well, you can, but that's not the point! She's my second favorite character!
pretend it was just a dream chapter 7 . 3/12/2013
Aaaw, now they have puppies! Puppies make everything better
pretend it was just a dream chapter 6 . 3/12/2013
Aaaaw they're so cute! I love this story
pretend it was just a dream chapter 5 . 3/12/2013
Yeah! That'll show Mr. Ootori! They are going to get an apartment togetherz,
pretend it was just a dream chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Oooh, poor Haruhi. She's lucky to have the club with her.
pretend it was just a dream chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
Oh they are so cute! I love it so far. You are really a great writer!
pretend it was just a dream chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
When Kyoyaa holds her all night has to be the cutest thing I have read! I liked this chapter a lot..
pretend it was just a dream chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Well this is upsetting, but over al, it was great. I loved this first chapter
PhantomhiveHost chapter 13 . 2/26/2013
Your story killed me, brought me back, made me happy, and killed me again before I was happy again.
Well then.
It was fantastic.
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