Reviews for Envy
mille libri chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I love the rhythm of the "Nock, draw, release" keeping the battle noise as a drumbeat behind the story and underscoring her thoughts, and I really appreciate the ending, that one act of relatively selfish self-sacrific on Loghain's part didn't magically set her free.
Addai chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Excellent! The ending really seals the emotional impact of the story.
NuitNuit chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Oh this is just wonderful. I am a huge fan of repetition and the repeated use of 'nock, draw, release' had me nodding. I feel you totally captured the conflicting emotions a Cousland would have in this particular end of the game.

Kudos on a well written story :)
FyreBrande chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Awesome story! You're really good at getting across emotions and everything. I loved the ending.
lisakodysam chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Very well done. I could see that as an opening chapter to a longer story at some point? (hint)

I could well understand why a Cousland child would want to make the sacrifice, and the fact that the story didn't have a happy ending made it that much more compelling.
Arsinoe de Blassenville chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Vivid and passionate writing. Very well done!
Shakespira chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Beautifully done.
Enaid Aderyn chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Excellent. Great work.