Reviews for Fun on the dance floor
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review:

This would really benefit from a beta reader's input - the poor spelling and grammar, the consistency errors, the repetition of words and the many cliches used detract and distract from the story.

A writing tip that really works - use the characters' names 99% of the time. Avoid the temptation to look for other ways of describing them - like 'the other man', 'the elder', 'the younger', 'the taller' - stick to Sam and Dean, and maybe the occasional 'his brother'. It will flow much better for the reader that way.
LeeMarieJack chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review:

Nicely done, in time to the music I believe. I can just see the pretty boys dancing; great image.

There were a few typos that have not been corrected and coarsing and coursing mean two entirely different things. Aside from those technical aspects you got your message over.

Very vivid and very memorable. Excellent work.
Winter Gray chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
You had me at glitter and belly button piercing.
Nicolene B chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Loved it! Jealous!Dean is just awesome! And Sammy's adorable no matter what!

Keep up the good work!
XXX
Nicolene
whydowematter chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
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That Eyebrow Freak chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
O.O This was fucking hot. One of the best Wincest stories I've read.
Mia Michaelis chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
That story was sooooooo hot! _ please write more!
TheologyDiscography chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Haha. I love this story. There's just something so sultry about it.

And yes, I do rather like your stories. They're well written enough that I fall in love with them despite a total lack of knowledge about the characters.
tofu-rox chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
holy SHIT

that was...holy FUCKITYFUCKINGFUCK!
felix222020 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
haha I now love you! This is toooooo amazing! Love it! Yay for sex on the dance floor! You cured my boredness. Then again that story makes it very hard to be bored! Exactly what I needed! A good story! Thanks again!
Phx chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Love when Sam is so sexy and Dean so possessive.
beeminionjeran chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
gosh thats hot. as in omg so very very friggin hot. i just LOVE storys where they make out on the dance floor. not that i seen many so far. so this is like .. the 3rd. And i makes me wanting more of this stuff. Dean's beeing possessive again rawr.

thanks for posting this anyway. after i read some real fun i didnt want to be annyoing and ask for a *sequal pretty please*. read my mind