Reviews for Sin Within
king cool 12 chapter 3 . 11/9
for 3 you like giant robots is from megas xlr
mellra chapter 3 . 1/5
Hey there! This was a really great piece, it actually help inspire me to write my own 'Naruto-is-Envy' story. I have a question for you in regards to that: could I use the Lee-Guy-Armstrong scene in my own story? I'd really appreciate it!
Simon D. Uzumaki chapter 3 . 10/22/2014
not bad at all, i loved how you did kakashi death form that one part of law abiding citizen lol it was epic and the mid fucks with kurinai and tsunade is good too lol
Simon D. Uzumaki chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
sounds promising
i will finish what you have worked on and let you knwo what i think after it
Eien Michi chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
This is really great. Tho i think you should have insisted more on how Kakashi was feeling?
lolmaster chapter 4 . 6/4/2014
fuuuuuck youuuu
cbyte64 chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Grif said why are we here?

Pls use mine pvt. Combites and use his cthulhu form
Toby860 chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
the phrase you dig Giants robots is from the Cartoon Network TV series Megas XLR. because another notable phrase of that song is chicks dig giant robots.
Rain Shigu chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
It's sad to see that you are no longer continuing this story. It was a pretty good read.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Real cool story and get back to work on it.
puma1sunfire chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
Interesting story so far. I am looking forward to more of it.
Three months later chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
Keep writing. I want to see the big reveal.
Dregus chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
oh bloody fucking hell...
Castigar0 chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
Awesome story,can't wait for the re-do, and to answer the Black & White question Lionhead made those games, and for one of the people's abilities, the ability to deconstruct and reconstruct and it may sound like alchemy but its just a cooool ability to have as the one with it can deconstruct incoming kunai and reform then as a wall of iron or deconstruct a person into an EXXPLOSION! just like the crimson alchemist, his ability was awesome XD
Aiseki0Hikari chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Omfg! Damn u 2 hell Cockkashi! (Kakashi: -glare-) U fucking piece of son of a bitch shit! How dare u kill hawtie cutie Naruto! U bitch! It's soo effin obvious who's "son" he is! I mean blond hair blue eyes! (-raise eye brow-) it's minato/arashi u damn moron! (-gasp-) yea u screw BIG time! Ohh! I'm a ranting? Guess I am sway bout tht' just angry at some porn lazy cyclops ninja -glares at kakashi- (-whimper-) -roll eyes- anyways me live this keep it up! N make kakashi pay dearly -grin evilly-
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