|Reviews for Sin Within|
| mellra chapter 3 . 1/5
Hey there! This was a really great piece, it actually help inspire me to write my own 'Naruto-is-Envy' story. I have a question for you in regards to that: could I use the Lee-Guy-Armstrong scene in my own story? I'd really appreciate it!
| Simon D. Uzumaki chapter 3 . 10/22/2014
not bad at all, i loved how you did kakashi death form that one part of law abiding citizen lol it was epic and the mid fucks with kurinai and tsunade is good too lol
| Simon D. Uzumaki chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
i will finish what you have worked on and let you knwo what i think after it
| Eien Michi chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
This is really great. Tho i think you should have insisted more on how Kakashi was feeling?
| lolmaster chapter 4 . 6/4/2014
| cbyte64 chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Grif said why are we here?
Pls use mine pvt. Combites and use his cthulhu form
| Toby860 chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
the phrase you dig Giants robots is from the Cartoon Network TV series Megas XLR. because another notable phrase of that song is chicks dig giant robots.
| Rain Shigu chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
It's sad to see that you are no longer continuing this story. It was a pretty good read.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Real cool story and get back to work on it.
| puma1sunfire chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
Interesting story so far. I am looking forward to more of it.
| Three months later chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
Keep writing. I want to see the big reveal.
| Dregus chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
oh bloody fucking hell...
| Castigar0 chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
Awesome story,can't wait for the re-do, and to answer the Black & White question Lionhead made those games, and for one of the people's abilities, the ability to deconstruct and reconstruct and it may sound like alchemy but its just a cooool ability to have as the one with it can deconstruct incoming kunai and reform then as a wall of iron or deconstruct a person into an EXXPLOSION! just like the crimson alchemist, his ability was awesome XD
| Aiseki0Hikari chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Omfg! Damn u 2 hell Cockkashi! (Kakashi: -glare-) U fucking piece of son of a bitch shit! How dare u kill hawtie cutie Naruto! U bitch! It's soo effin obvious who's "son" he is! I mean blond hair blue eyes! (-raise eye brow-) it's minato/arashi u damn moron! (-gasp-) yea u screw BIG time! Ohh! I'm a ranting? Guess I am sway bout tht' just angry at some porn lazy cyclops ninja -glares at kakashi- (-whimper-) -roll eyes- anyways me live this keep it up! N make kakashi pay dearly -grin evilly-
| sketchfan chapter 4 . 12/27/2010
hey listen dude,if you need help on sin within here,I'll help you out