Reviews for Ding!
Someone chapter 1 . 6/17
Love the story.
Then again I'm a big hypnosis fan so...
Anyways!
Do you still plan in continuing this?
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
as a wrestling fan i feel deeply offended
Senwicke chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Aaaaw... You undid the spell m
no fun
Overrunner chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Update man! I'm dying to read another chapter!
Darkblaze40 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
another chapter maybe?
drizma chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
when the pizza guy comes he rings the bell...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
i really enjoyed this your writing is quite good. Keen for the next chapter :) update soon!
I'm My Own OC chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
i really like this. and if you still need a partner, i'd be glad to help :) please PM me if your still interested
srade9779 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
so can you continue this please
Shalemaster chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Damn that is strange raving lezbians
Albert J. MacMashiere chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Well, that was quite interesting, and fun to read. I really wish that there was another page. I can't help but think that when they get to Carmalita's apartment there's gonna be a bell that rings, and they “have it out”. Plus I'm also thinking about what would happen at work when that hypno-lesbian-ness kicks in.

P.S. Can't help thinking about them doing it on a work desk at the police station. Please do another page/chapter!
Sexy Carmelita chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Please continue
Nepezi chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
the next day...

Chief of interpol: to be more efficient, I have set up this bell to tell everyone when it is twelve oclock, just to make sure it works, we shall have a test demonstration shall we? (rings bell)

Carmelita & Neyla: (look at each other)

Sly: (in vents) this looks interesting
AllgoodPhil chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
pretty good I love it keep it up write the next chapter soon!
Carmelita'sFox chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I love it a lot! Please continue soon!
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