Reviews for I hunt for you with bloodied feet
timano chapter 4 . 3/15/2011
And what she leaves of him in this alternate version of Who history is what becomes the Valeyard? Perhaps I made a connection that wasn't there-I tend to do that.

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Anyway, I enjoyed the story-there's some pretty good writing in there!
Novindalf chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Wow, you’re really not kidding when you say dark!doctor, are you? For him to lash out at Rory, he must be pretty done for – although I suppose given what is going on with River, this is just how he would react. Slightly feral, just like her.

‘Each time he returns to the tardis, alone, she sings a song of lamentation and he realises that she too is under River's spell.’

This is a lovely touch – shows just how much a part of the Doctor River has become, and by association, just how much a part of the TARDIS he is, just like him.

As an aside, trust you to bring River’s shoes in somehow...
Isolith chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Absolutely loved this chapter. And kudos for Florence Machine :)
ParisNeverEnded chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Love it! It's very sad though :(
Hatless Cat chapter 3 . 8/16/2010
Very... River, underneath it all. She speaks like River, acts like River, and is yet so young and animalistic! Beautiful characterization! Love the song Howl, too. Doctor is totally him, yet desperately in love. This ain't a Ten/Rose story! And it's beautiful that way.
Isolith chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
What a wickedly fascinating story - I like it :)