Reviews for Finally Together
crownephotography chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
You did an amazing job! The ending of that book has plagued me for years with how it left off. I needed an ending that had substance. One that I could take a bite out of (pun intended). You gave me that. You fleshed it out and did the characters justice. Thank you!
I do like how she wasn't pregnant yet, in this ending you wrote, because she is too young and she just started to act more mature. So being pregnant would've been too fast. But I also didn't like how in the book, the author basically was saying it was her DUTY to be with Gabe and how thats the only reason she was doing it. I didn't like that. So it was really nice how you wrote in here about how she realized that she actually loved him.
On a side note, if you just happened to want to make my day, could you write out their wedding and skip forward two years and end with her getting pregnant and actually feeling happy about it? I would be beyond thrilled! ;)
So if you do write more on it, please let me be the first to read it! my e-mail is
Ginger Flowerz chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
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Super MKatR chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
I have read nearly all Blood and Chocolate fan fiction out there, especially in regards to what happens after the end of the book. Your one shot is the best I've read yet. kudos.
Madam Queen Kim chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Excellent Writing! I loved reading this because I hated the ending of Blood and Chocolate. It is nice to see a writer do it justice! Thank you!
BaileeJBear chapter 2 . 5/28/2014
I liked it. It was a cute take on the book. I enjoyed how you included key parts of the book, not just lemon.
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Loved it!
amber.mccall1 chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
i am enjoying you story i hope. there is more please be more
Miss I Northman chapter 5 . 12/2/2012
Reviews aren't everything, you have a really lovely writing style and I am in love with this story. A sequel would be lovely if you ever get the time!
estelin chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
this was awesome. i wish there was more keep up the good work and writing.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/21/2012
hi
Guest chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
keep going
Superdani4Ever chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
wonderful story!thank you!
kitcat2522 chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
If you are writing for the opinions of other people, you are writing for the wrong reason. There's nothing wrong with asking for feedback/constructive criticism but you shouldn't be asking other people to affirm you as a writer. You're fishing for compliments.
bookworm48856 chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
this story is so not done. you better finish it or write or sequel.
Catwomanxxx chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
awwwwe its such a cute story, i enjoyed it and well done ]
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