So stupid. It’s obvious to me this writer knows NOTHING of real fights and NOTHING about war.

More of the good guys being criminally stupid.

This writer is a fucking idiot. Naruto can make thousands of shadow clones. Most of their so called “problems” could be easily solved if naruto would stop being a fucking idiot and start helping more. He could damn near have konoha repaired in a day or two. He could single handedly wipe out the minor villages armies in an hour freeing up their trade routes. Naruto could flash supplies around in scrolls as needed. The sheer incompetence being shown by the good guys is overwhelming and you have this being done for stupid drama.

I think my biggest problem with this story in particular is how absolutely retarded it is that they don’t have faster communications. Information makes and breaks wars and they rely exclusively on runners. Why? Computers exist. Why has not a single seal master invented anything to help, nothing. This is beyond stupid. It makes every single person in your story a fucking retarded monkey.

I also dont understand why he hadnt tried mastering the raiton synapses boost, even if he doesnt want to use the Lightning armor for whatever reason. He should be proficient enough to just boost his reactions by that factor of 4 you showed in this story. All he would have to do is just send a couple hundred clones every day to Mt. Myoboku to train in private and he would never be at risk since its a clone attemping it. Also, with these monthly timeskips he could have been doing that same thing with his element mixing and even mastering fire and earth jutsu.

Youve done a lot to not waste all his cannon potential like Kishi did but i still think you missed these opportunities. Including the fact that for whatever reason, people believe he’ll never be able to use genjutsu or Iryojutsu’s. A couple hundred clones on nothing but chakra control every day to get it high enough and a seal to help regulate the foxes disruption of it and he should be able to get to near perfect control. Either way, great realistic power fantasy so far.

He should really get used to using a Tri-pong on his off hand for situations like this,it wouldnt get in the way of his single handed seals and would allow him more maneuverability with the Hiriashin V2. Speaking of which, he should also inscribe his sword with it so he can throw and teleport to it and then link it with a seal on his person so he can call it back to him instantly

600 paper bombs? More like 600 billion.

I'm sorry mate but the doable surname is just killing me with cringe rn. just name him naruto namikaze or just naruto uzumaki and be done with it.

Ah, I found them.

So uhhhh where's ichiraku? They haven't really been in the story unless I missed something.

I love NarutoYugito's relationship and this amazing story

I have one question what is kakashi going to do when he sees the movie?

Naruto had post-nut clarity lmfao

Personally, I don’t see why almost all stories have him specialize in ninjutsu. Uzumaki have massive yang chakra and powerful bodies. They’re made for close combat and overwhelming chakra dumps.

This is perhaps the main reason why I think jutsu were handled in Part 1 the best. They were used somewhat sparingly to impact the battlefield instead of being thrown around uselessly like candy. They were strategic, which was the only reason knowing a lot of them was useful as you could fit them into more situations that way which would give you an advantage if you have enough chakra and control to use them frequently enough for it. That, and Part 1 not having chakra affinities.

The real power of Ranmaru that makes him dangerous is being able to cast illusions just by looking at someone. Illusions not even the other doujutsu can see through.

Who takes an hour to cook stew? It’s like when you had it take ten minutes to create a rasenshuriken. I think you have absolutely no concept of time. To the Nth degree.