|Reviews for Tales From Vana'diel|
| WordBirdNerd chapter 15 . 8/31/2010
Great detail. It's nice to see someone write a realistic take on a video game without changing everything. I especially like your descriptions of synthesis.
You might want to add a summary that gives readers an idea of what your story is about. That way people who like stories like this one can find it. Look at the kinds of summaries other stories have for examples.