Reviews for Last Romance
Honest Critic chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Wow.
I have no words.

Except the following:

Your plotline is so basic and cliché. Couldn't you be in the least just a smidge creative?
Nah, you're an OBVIOUS left brain thinker.
Which is NOT bad, trust me (Einstein was a left brainer).

Your characters are OOC.
Nothing too say except watch the damn anime.
Well, at least Momo is. I have no idea in the slightest who this asshat OC of yours is, but I HATE him.

It's too short.
Ai yai yai.
253 words and counting.
Girl, man, pedophile, idk what the fuck you are, but that's WAY too short for a fanfic. No me gusta.

Cordially,
Brutally Honest Critics

Oh, and one more thing.
You know what makes me feel sad?

You have so much potential but you seem to not want to use it to create what could've been an AMAZING fanfic.

I hope you reach your full talent, because you've got somethin' great stirring up here.

OH! AND ANOTHER THING!
I CANNOT THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR YOUR GRAMMAR. A PLUS!

Love,
The Grammar Nazi in Me
heytenten chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
just a flashback dudes, now I forgot my account log-in info for this account :( so sad
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
so sad
Sempiternal-Silence chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
ummm. hoping thatthis isn't finished...
Amy Hinamori chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
it is srot but its pretty good
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Your so horrible! Why did u make your stupid fanfic so short!U made me waste my frikin time!
anjulee chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I relli think that you kan make your chapters a lityle bit longer... but the overall theme of the story is quite intersting... i know how momo feels to have someone you love to fall in love with your bestfriend... the only thing i have to say .. is make your paragraph longer and use mor desriptive words