Reviews for Away At Training
warrior of six blades chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
nice job with this one shot story of you keep up the good work on your other stories.
RockyRoadSmith chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Oh my gosh! That was fantastic! When I first watched this episode, I was so excited that we would get a chance to see some alone interaction between Holly and Genki since the monsters went off to train. I was really dissappointed when it showed them eating for about 2 minutes and then switched off to Mocchi and Most for the rest of the episode. We were ripped off! This really ties in what happened between the two and the moments we didn't get to see during the episode. You wrote this wonderfully! I love how you even added the part where everyone rushes off to find Mocchi in the night. It really made this story feel like the actual episode. And the whole Genki and Holly hugging and shy kissing part was adorable! I honestly squealed to myself when I read it. Keep up the great writing! _