Reviews for Revenge
RaggingLightningWolf chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
awsome story. i think that naruto and sasuke should go and train together along with deepen thier frendship PS i cant spell worth shit!
Riku Uzumaki chapter 6 . 8/31/2010
Ummm... you do realize that this is supposed to be a NARUHINA story, right? Hinata was only in one chapter, and it wasn't very long either. Plus, she didn't even get to talk to him!
Wolf Master Uchiha chapter 6 . 8/30/2010
you could make that at the frogs place there is a snake that could train sasuke/orelse keep going with the mnga but put pain and madarathat attack the leaf and while there attacking sasuke learns the truth but still helps naruto and stops dnzo from the what are the pairings?
boombox4562 chapter 6 . 8/29/2010
yay this chapter was a whole lot longer!

i am clueless when it comes to ideas. sorry

i lost

oh well
snowflakeyukiharuno chapter 5 . 8/22/2010
Write longer chapters, longer chapters and write more!
sabbath9997 chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
The story is interesting

but the chapters are very short

I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see what will happen

bye
foshizzlexD chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
I love the story..

but the chapters need to be longer o.O
snowflakeyukiharuno chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
SHORT CHAPTER ANN!
Shika The Brain chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
Your writing isn't bad and the storyline you've come up with is interesting. Your biggest drawback is how short the chapter lengths are. Your combined word count for these four chapters is what a minimum single chapter word count length should be.

Hinata's hair color is Indigo.
Riku Uzumaki chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
I figure that if you wish to describe Hinata's hair color more precisely, you could say that her hair color is midnight blue.

Just a suggestion...
AbaratFox chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
It's an interesting story so far and I'm excited to see what you do with it!
snowflakeyukiharuno chapter 3 . 8/11/2010
Next one soon? XD