|Reviews for The Sea Is Her Downfall|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
¡VIEN LA HISTORIA! PERO AI, UN PEKEÑO DETALLE QUE NO ME GUSTA: ¡KIERO MAS ROMANCE ENTRE LUKI Y ASLAN! NO PONGAS TANTO A ASLAN COMO DIOS, PONLO MAS COMO UN LEÓN, O UN HUMANO ENAMORADO ¡AZ OTRA HISTORIA PRONTO DE ROMANCE LUKI X ASLAN!
| stracony26 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
| doodlesonlinedpaper chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
That was really quite amazing. It reminds me of nuns who say they are married in soul to God, except more. And for me, Aslan seems to be warning Lucy away from those other loves because either they'd end in heartbreak, were not meant to be, or would leave her and her lover/potential husband unhappy...and then it cumulated in Lucy falling for what seems to be the most unattainable man of all. All in all a very thought provoking, interesting, well written story.
I particularly enjoyed the formatting: the question and reply sequence made it feel almost biblical, in a way since it was slightly lyrical. I loved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
I read this a few months ago, and I've just reread it. You completely captured Lucy's essence, in my opinion, and I felt every one of her emotions. I will admit I shed a few quiet tears, and I had a knot in my chest as I read. Beautiful work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
I truly loved this piece! It broke my heart a little. I wished for more, but at the same time I loved the brevity of each section. Really lovely. Beautiful job! I adored the ending.
| electra2pandora chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
I loved this, especially the ending. Great work! It's a lovely one-shot :)
| Luna25684 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
| Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Wow, this is a really interesting concept, like a missing puzzle piece.
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
| Starbrow chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Superb story, I enjoyed it tremendously! You caught the characterizations very skillfully, with lots of attention to canon detail which made it even better for a Narnia fan like me ;-). I didn't read the romance pairing at the top so I was really surprised (pleasantly) at the end! It is a terrific explanation of why Lucy never married, and totally makes sense that her one great love is Aslan, although it somehow takes a moment to process it as a *romantic* love. You did it so so well.
I loved your Caspian episode, there is some beautiful subtext there that fits seamlessly with canon. I would be so happy to read an extended Caspian/Lucy story from you (what? it's my favorite pairing)... you just have a wonderful way with these characters and your turn of words is truly delicious. Even when it's not overt, you realllllly make them have chemistry! You should totally do it! ;-)
| CreggaFoeseeker chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
mmm. a tender story about guarding ones heart, and falling love with the only person that matters. It would've been nice if Aslan had directed Lucy to a man in this story, and then she would see the end result. still a good story.
| Song of Stillness chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
This was beautifully written and different. And it made me think - which is always a good thing! Well done :)
| emalico chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Oh wow I didn't think it would end like that
| Heartwould chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Beautiful! Lovely metaphor, if so you meant it, of the sea.
| GirlWaterShaman chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
...loved loved loved this 3
| Leshaya chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
What a wonderful short little story. I wish you had expanded each section a little bit more, but I enjoyed the briefness of it as well. It is nice to finally see a story on Fanfiction where Aslan and Lucy have a relationship. Alot of people think about it I'm sure, but nobody has written about it. Thank you for supplying, perhaps another one? Keep up the great work!