|Reviews for The Illusion of Happiness|
| d-kronk chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
I really like her reaction and Derek's reaction to her. I'm glad he got her to agree to something and love the month timeline. I really hope that Derek is there and I really hope the next part of this fic is posted. :-)
| d-kronk chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
I really like Penelope freaking out here, it was really good. And I'm glad Derek finally got a word in, I really hope he figures out how to woo her... although I think he just made a huge step in that direction by just admitting it.
| d-kronk chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I really like Penelope's reaction to Derek showing up. Her thoughts are great and I really looking forward to what he tells her.
| Pheonix1995 chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
Poor Pen - Hope Derek can prove he really loves her! :)
| Harleyzgirl chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
I'm not certain Rossi did the right thing in pissing off Pen, but I liked the result.
| celticstarwolf chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
so close yet so far away wonderful ending hon thanks for sharing
| anything-new chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
Please post the next installment soon :)
| gwydienne chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
I've read some great fics, but right now, I can't think of one that I like better than this. I love that you took the road never travelled and had Garcia questioning Derek's profession of love based on his past. I can't wait for the next story...
| Garmor chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Great story and love how she didnt make it easy for him and how he is going to have to think and prove he wants her...great work and cant wait for the next installment
| LoveforPenandDerek chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
an emotionally intense chapter. I liked it. I don't blame Pen a bit for feeling this way
| klcm chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Ooh! Looking forward to the next bit! Loved the tension and her giving him the ultimatum... now let's see the month later effect P Loved this whole story!
| klcm chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
I'm sorry to hear about JWynn, lovely story to dedicate to her ) Oh I bet he could woo her with her a blink! Or is that just me? P brilliant update!
| PinkAngel17 chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
As much as I'd like her to believe him right away, what she did makes sense and I definitely see her point. Really like the 'in a month' thing and loved Morgan's last line. Can't wait for the next part!
| emzypemzy chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
As much as I want to shake some sense into her for not believing him I can actually see her common sense coming in to things if it were ever to happen - gotta protect your heart. Brilliant chapter! Loved this three shot - you really have these two down to pat! Looking forward to the next one :)
| Tezsler chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
OH! I wasn't expecting that ending but I loved it none the less. I am kind of mad at Garcia for not believing him but I totally understand. I love the timeline she gave him.
His parting line was sheer brilliance :
"One month, Baby Girl," he said, reaching for the door. "Then you're mine."
I find a cocky yet vulnerable Morgan to be oh so sexy.
Thank you and I will be waiting anxiously for "The Difference."