Reviews for Burn the Heart Out of You
jjijjibeem chapter 1 . 6/25/2022
Brenda Joyeux1 chapter 8 . 3/8/2020
Three words. I like it.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/4/2018
Wow! Very tense, very good!
TheCrimsonPen chapter 8 . 8/8/2017
Brilliant. Truly.
BodhiJones chapter 8 . 11/6/2016
Absolutely beautiful. A real tour de force or writing skill. You've captured all the characters so well, bravo!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/28/2016
You're mean. You made me believe that John was dead for a chapter. If you had actually killed him, only the amazing perfect beautiful writing you have offered the world would have saved you from an untimely demise.
ravencarr chapter 8 . 4/23/2015
Freaky moriarty *shudders*
The ending is just...well..end. Like dead end.
Was hoping for more development btw those two.
Perhaps a "one month later" or "a year later" kind of story :)

Anyways, thank you for the story! Virtual cookies to you :)
Lillian Sunshine chapter 8 . 2/7/2015
I was really enjoying your story. It was dark and interesting. Some beautiful character studies. I'm sorry but I really feel you took the easy way out with that happy ending with John. Otherwise it was really good.
Alibi Nonsense chapter 8 . 12/5/2014
Johnlock, crying, utter madness and a dead Mrs Hudson. My life is official over. It is a good kind of over, but still a tissue box weeping kind of over.
Please let me spit on Moriarty's gravestone.
jackie chapter 8 . 9/2/2014
I'm late getting into this fan fiction thing. I know this story has been around for a while.
It's a beautifully written and exciting story. I loved it.
seanaface chapter 6 . 5/17/2014
I really like this! Thanks for writing such great stuff. Sherlock blaming himself is completely believable ... but I didn't get John and thest police blaming Sherlock. Moriarty is a terrorist nutjob. Why would ANYONE think he would keep promises? Moriarty's responsible for 85% of the difficult crimes Sherlock had to help solve...pretty sure he can't be trusted (so changeable) Though def initely an oversight to not evacuate more tourist spots.
RandmWriter chapter 8 . 4/27/2014
OH GOD! I can't believe I was right! XDDDD


Great ending to a great story! I can't even! The plot was so brilliant, genius and complex that it makes "His Last Vow" look like a freaking fluff story about unicorns, rainbows and canon Moriarty is a bloody saint compared to this!

Ok... rant over! Actually it wasn't a rant because I'm not mad about it! How can I! It's totally amazing! I love your stories and "Explosions, Literal and Otherwise" is my absolute FAVORITE!

Ok... I've calmed down... Anyway, Great story and... I just can't anymore...

Oh, like i said before, feel free to PM me! :) Bye! :D

-RW ;)
RandmWriter chapter 1 . 4/26/2014

Hmmm... It disappeared. Great mystery! Let me guess... let's see, what can make that happen... *Mind Palace* Let me guess, mirrors? It would work since nobody bothered to check the case. He could have put up mirrors to make the illusion that it's missing but it's not. It's right there... :3 I dunno! Just my guess. :3

Anyway, great story! Is my theory right? XD

Oh, feel free to PM me and once again, GREAT STORY! :D

-RW ;)
Zozeebobs chapter 8 . 10/19/2013
I cannot seem to comprehend what I just read, nor come to terms with the bitter fact that its over. I have felt so much enotion readying this, having a contrast of what i believe to be a very intelligent and powerful novel, and yet, despite my going over it, my mind is still trying to process what I have just read. Just brilliantly well written and if you're not an actual author then freaking get out there and publish something!
Knyle Borealis chapter 8 . 10/4/2013
I just killed me. A little bit, deep down. No, no, a lot. I've been very thoroughly, completely killed. And I loved it. :-) DX
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