|Reviews for Foreplay|
| Lady Hummingbird chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
It was great!i can totally see Hibari-sempai doing something like that!it was very hoy!congrats!;)
| Mx. Irony chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I was torn between being turned on and laughing. This was sick and wrong - just plain WRONG - but so Hibari. Once again you managed to bring together two completely different elements into your writing and make them work.
In the end though, I have to feel sorry for Amami. So close, but no cigar.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
| crizarah chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
It's fabulous~ it's totally what hibari would do :))
| FantasiiBubbles chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
friggin love this :)
i laughed so hard i think i cried a little xD
| DeactivatedAccountLEM chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I absolutely love this story! It'd be so great if you could expand this into a full story, the way these two work together is perfect, and even though we only see a little of your Oc, she seems like she could be really interesting :) Keep up the good work!
| Lara0XM chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This is really kinky but so Hibari. I can see him making his partner sing the school anthem while doing the deed :) as far as i could see, no spelling or grammar mistakes.
| pocky chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Ohoho, Hibari~! This right here is kinky win - keep up the amazing work. :
| gaarasninjachick chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
XDDDD AWESOME I was lol'ing! Hibari-san would totally make his lover do that! I laughed so hard I cried XD