|Reviews for Written in the Stars|
| FanLass chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
This is a great story and I’m anxious to read more I hear there’s a part two and three. Good visualization and I really cried at one point. That’s the mark of a good writer that you can manipulate your reader to feel what you want them to feel. Great job!
| Buddy0192 chapter 1 . 1/13/2017
This is excellent! I came late to the table, so I know that there's more, and I can't wait. I'm reading through your FF archive, started at the back to read things as you posted them. That way I can see change and growth in your writing and don't have to search for sequelS as I know I'll run into them sooner or later. Thanks for sharing your talent, I look forward to a great experience. BUDDY
| Leydhawk chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
A very interesting idea. I enjoyed it, thanks!
| ananova chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
I liked this, it was well-written. Though I doubt Jack would have had Thor teleport them from Jenny's office, that just seems a little out of character. I mean, I can see him asking Thor for the favor but I would think he would try to get somewhere without witnesses first, otherwise he exposes the whole Stargate project. Still I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
| mmkbrook chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
That was a nice touch of Tim asking Jack, if he could call him dad. Sad about Sarah, and happy that Jack still loved her enough to do this for her.
Jenny seems so arrogant and snippy; she was never one of my favorite characters.
| OCMichael chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Very nice story.
| Kansas Scout chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
You have a nice start to the series I saw you wrote for this set of crossovers.
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
| FORD B chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
| Infinitechange chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Very interesting story.
| Gottahavemyncis chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Ok, so forget my idea about Tim's mother. I'll just be patient in reading Written 3...until I have my next brilliant idea (NOT)!
| dreameralways chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
OK, lovely story but sorry, Sam would run circles around Tim. Tim is very brilliant, but he has one specialty and he studied it in school, and that's computers. Sam studies physics and yet mastered not only physics but computers and engineering as well. Still, interesting story though.
| Flowerfairy30 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
That was wonderful. I love SG-1 and Jack in particular. So this story having Jack and Tim in it was great. I can see Jack acting just like that. Now I am going to read the next Written in the Stars.
| Madances chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Good story. Tracy
| alix33 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
"Unless you mean the lemon poppy seed muffin sitting on your desk with your standard cup of coffee." - I have never had a lemon poppy seed muffin, but I have had lemon poppy seed cake, which was simply scrumptious. Does the muffin taste anything like the cake iwth the identical ingredients?