Reviews for Confessions of a Wayward Son
Sobek Memnon chapter 1 . 1/23
"You...you are called betrayer. How poetic... You seek redemption? Forgiveness? From who? Our brothers who slaughtered us? Our Emperor who forsook us? Who will forgive you now... You cannot run to the lapdogs or their false god nor us. Where will you go. Who are you fighting for? Not ignorant mankind who feared us and butchered us. No? You think that they are still worth fighting for!? THAN HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN PROSPERO! Our HOME! Do you FORGET?! The day the wolves destroyed everything! You are the Betrayer... For you have betrayed the memory of our legion. You wear the colors of Crimson and gold. That once meant something. Hope; now it is mearly our blood that you wear...How poetic."
justreidabook chapter 7 . 12/8/2016
Exquisite
Tiberuimworld chapter 2 . 12/6/2016
this fanfiction is bloody epic! I love this idea man! i wonder what other ideas float around in that genius brain of yours
Dedischado chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
What do the Black Legion call him?

Also, good going on the Alpha Legion, I think it is cooler if they are still loyal as well.
ardvarkeating101 chapter 7 . 11/6/2016
Christ on a cracker why the fuck isn't this *masterpiece*, this bloody fucking art, finished?
spoopyjoelbaby chapter 7 . 9/23/2016
I loved it! This entire thing has been really really great, fun to read and fits reallyyy well. Good job.
donald chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
hey, consider making a faction where their people are tiny. Their ships are tiny. Their vehicles are tiny. But all of them are fast, hard hitting, sophisticated for their size & have shields.

GG WH40k universe.
NathanEryk chapter 7 . 5/17/2016
Neat. I love it, girmdark yet hopeful, one of the most enjoyable I've read so far.
-NathanEryk
edvin.ka chapter 7 . 12/25/2015
god dammit this is epic pleas writhe MORE
Misashi chapter 7 . 10/23/2015
Loved it. Hope you would have continued writing this fan fic. I could imagine myself being immersed in your scenes of carnage!
floatingmangocake chapter 5 . 10/22/2015
Human, after all.
Dutchman chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
It was amazing the way you did this. Never in a million years would I have expected this in a story you have successfully plucked my heat strings and aroused my sence of badassery. All I have to say is fantastic
dreddman chapter 7 . 7/17/2015
awwwww shit the hammer has been BROUGHT! this is so cool
Asuryan chapter 7 . 5/23/2015
Holy shit that was EPIC.

This is one of the best fics I have ever read. And you found a way to actually characterize and somewhat humanize an Astartes, and one from a traitor legion no less. Especially with Sylvia. That made me take a power fist right in the feels.

Don't even get me started with the Trucido Rex. The battle scene was absolutely awesome and you managed to make it fairly balanced as well, with Apophis and Rex nearly obliterated near the end. And if I got hit by a power fist from Sylvia's tale, then Rex's memories and Apophis empathizing with it, has now turned the fist into a Thunder Hammer.

My only sadness is that this story hasn't been updated since 2011. But if you do decide to update it, I shall eagerly await it.
JB chapter 7 . 1/22/2015
As a retired Mail Order Troll (1996-1998) and someone lucky enough to have been around the company for many years in various guises I've read some good fan fiction over the years.

Yours was the best.

I leave this comment here in the hopes that it leads you towards the pursuit of a creative career that is so evidently within your abilities.

Many regards.
JB
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