Reviews for Confessions of a Wayward Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An incomplete interesting piece. Prayers to the Author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Baby come back, you can blame it all. on. me. I was wrong, and I want you to fiiiiiiiiiiinish this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that... is fucking depressing |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story to read and I'd love to see more although considering the update was back in 2011 I doubt it but nonetheless I hope. A lovely story that really does makes Astartes seem a lot more human. Great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typically I absolutely ABHOR first person. I just hate it. But this looks interesting |
![]() ![]() "You...you are called betrayer. How poetic... You seek redemption? Forgiveness? From who? Our brothers who slaughtered us? Our Emperor who forsook us? Who will forgive you now... You cannot run to the lapdogs or their false god nor us. Where will you go. Who are you fighting for? Not ignorant mankind who feared us and butchered us. No? You think that they are still worth fighting for!? THAN HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN PROSPERO! Our HOME! Do you FORGET?! The day the wolves destroyed everything! You are the Betrayer... For you have betrayed the memory of our legion. You wear the colors of Crimson and gold. That once meant something. Hope; now it is mearly our blood that you wear...How poetic." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exquisite |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fanfiction is bloody epic! I love this idea man! i wonder what other ideas float around in that genius brain of yours |
![]() ![]() ![]() What do the Black Legion call him? Also, good going on the Alpha Legion, I think it is cooler if they are still loyal as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Christ on a cracker why the fuck isn't this *masterpiece*, this bloody fucking art, finished? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! This entire thing has been really really great, fun to read and fits reallyyy well. Good job. |
![]() ![]() hey, consider making a faction where their people are tiny. Their ships are tiny. Their vehicles are tiny. But all of them are fast, hard hitting, sophisticated for their size & have shields. GG WH40k universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neat. I love it, girmdark yet hopeful, one of the most enjoyable I've read so far. -NathanEryk |
![]() ![]() ![]() god dammit this is epic pleas writhe MORE |
![]() ![]() Loved it. Hope you would have continued writing this fan fic. I could imagine myself being immersed in your scenes of carnage! |