Reviews for The Girl in the Cave
Fleija chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I love this story. I love the happy ending. I love how you depict Parsee, always putting in those little sidenotes and feelings to really immerse the reader in her perspective. 10 stars, 5 thumbs, whatever. Incredibly good short story, you're awesome.
Timehopper chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Nice and very, very realistic.

I think you got perfectly Parsee's character, and the matter about her curse was... well, heart-wrenching.

I liked your Yuugi too, since she IS, yes, the drunkard carefree punch-happy oni she is, but she's also capable of caring and tenderness and very cunning when needed!
Eiki chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
loved it :
touhoufan chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
AWESOME!
wolfy1324 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
... holy crap... that was AWESOME! I love you, and this story! seriously, it was so cute and realistic (poor Parsee). Good job~ Keep writing
The.Hoppy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
One of my favorite pairings. :D And really well done. Nice interaction between people who weren't in the spotlight too (why Remilia, whatever were you thinking about~?), making it a fun story as well as a good one. If you write anything else I'll probably jump on it happily.
Anonymous Pyramid Head chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
We all need someone...Even a Bridge Princess like Parsee...

With all the fan-arts of the two of them, this is but a tip of the iceberg for the trials that await these two...

Yuugi x Parsee is one of my favorite couples...They fit each other so nicely and complement each others needs and wants...

A job well done on this heart-warming story...

Hehe...Parsee needs more self-esteem since she's actually pretty beautiful despite her saying she isn't
The Burning Snow chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Daww. That wins.
The pie shunned to be killed chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I like this story, and your portrayal of characters. Parsee is one of my favourite characters, her two themes are amazing. I doubt Yuugi would cry, but for the sake of the story, it's good IMO.