|Reviews for Thunderstorm|
| P.A.W.07 chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
That last line was kind of heart breaking. Great short!
| Illaeshin chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Came across this one a while ago, don't know why I didn't favorite it then. That last line though . . . _ Foreshadowing much. Well done.
| PurpleArmadillo chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Great charaterisations and descriptions! Touching too, and I love that you elaborated on a small mission in the game's storyline.
| DarkEcoFreak chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Ah the irony of that last line… love it! That was great!
| meltinglacier chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Awww, it's so cute! I like this whole idea of Big Jak cuddling up with Little Jak. And I like all those little hints that they're the same person that you peppered the story with. Also, having the guards say things that are in the game was a nice touch. And that last line was so funny. Ah, the irony.
| White Cherry Rose chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
holy crap! that is just toooooooooo AmaZiNG to
discribe, luv how u didnt make the characters
seem off/ unlike themselves. i wish u could have
wrote a second part to this!
these Jak/lil' Jak storys r hard to write (& 4 me hard 2 find 4 sum reson)
i no u've herd this a billion times but im gonna
make it a billion...and 1!
I LUV IT!
PleAsE check out: From One World to The Next
| Didi chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
ME LOVE! Ya got a fan. Now to read "A Matter of Time"story. Mysterious Angel-05 says it's I'll be the judge of that. -_-
| Dark Eco Monster chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Awe! And here everybody thought Jak has no soft side. Only his younger self and Daxter can do that. LoL!. Love the story.
| Emily chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
LOVED! Just so sweet!
| Yami Dragoness of Dark chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Oooooooh the irony of that last statement. Very well done, it was cute :) poor little Jak er...Mar, he's scared stiff. -hugs kid-
| M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Loved it. Are you gonna continue it or is this it?
| Starstreak 777 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Sorry, Jak, but he will end up like you! He is you!
Good story! Simple and soothing, I like it.
| LeiaOrganicSolo chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Interaction between Jak and his younger self is always cool, but yours was amazing. The mention of deja vu, the ending, it was just awesome! Keep it up.
| EcoSeeker247 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Wow, this was good! I remember that mission in the game. XD But seriously, great writing, everyone's in character, and I loved the ending! Keep up the good work!
| Vandenberg chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Great job in writing this up. Your characterisation of everyone was pretty believable and you are positively /evil/ for putting in that little twist at the end. :'(
I hope you keep writing! On an unrelated note: god dammit, now I'm addicted to Jak and Daxter fics again... I hope there are a few new ones to read. _"