|Reviews for Annoyance|
| Kiki Lelsissia chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
First - awesome. I do hope the toilet survives having all those lighters flushed down it, though. A whole pillowcase full? Wow...
Somehow, Demyx confusing "Romeo x Juliet" with the actual "Romeo and Juliet" makes perfect sense to me. It's just so... Demyx. And I love how Zexion's completely used to having to explain various famous works of literature. Literature's so neglected... although I tend to dislike the classics anyway. Hamlet was decent, but Romeo and Juliet? I'd rather not remember it... Dx
I noticed one thing. Near the end, Demyx says "You told him that you were the one who newly blew up the science department, huh?" I think you meant to put "nearly" instead of "newly".
Your stories are always so entertaining. I don't know why it took me this long to read this one.
| Sparklytea chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Loved the story, but it seems to have double posted itself. I had a mental picture of Axel having every light color ever made. Even those really weird personalized ones.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I don't know why it repeated at the end, but it was really good. Really funny friendship stuff. I really enjoyed this read.
| Dreamy Duskywing chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Okay, first of all I loved it! Axel's all whiney and cute. lol. But...I'm confused...You do realise it repeats twice yes? At first I thought it was another scenario...Axel bugging Roxas again. But I skim read it and I'm pretty sure it's exactly the same :S