|Reviews for Planetside: Auraxis Chronicles|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/31
i hope your still makeing this stuff
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31
holy crap man... good job
| spark n' Jetz chapter 2 . 1/26/2014
I wish you were more active on fanfiction. I love this story.
| spark n' Jetz chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Amazing story. This is great!
| Reader chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
| Mr. Chambers IADT chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
to be honest the over use of scene establishment really killed getting into the story, and you need a bit more basic knowledge of command/military thinking. you write like someone who is writing for the first time, all enthusiasm for the story but very little ground work. stop trying to make us see what you see, just write it how you see it. we are smart, we will get it.
Mr. Chambers, IADT
| A Feral Fatty chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Woo! First Review! Awesome work dude, maybe some vehicle combat later?